Oh my gosh. It's very rare to find a masterpiece like this. The sasukiba made my toes curl and stopped my heart for a second. The feeling of angst here is so fuckin haunting.

I love how you wrote this! ;)

Aww. It was fun reading this. Quite a challenge for me to keep track of what day it was and what's already happened. Haha! I'm not a shounen-ai/yaoi reader so the SasuKiba scenes came kind of slow to me. I mean, I didn't understand what was happening right away. Hahaha! I started to read this without knowing the difference betweeb "SasuSaku KibaIno" and "SasuSakuKibaIno". XD
I'm sad about the KibaIno situation, though. Hopeful they'd find the same love Sasuke found with Sakura. Heehee Those to are so adorable together. XD
I liked this story. :)
much love from renzie17 x

Sasukiba...you make it sound good lol

Breathtaking.

Wow.
I.. I think I get it. Lemme reread that sometime, heh.
I LOOOOVE the format. It calls to me, it does.
That was HOTHOTHOT.
SasuKiba seems so... Guilty.
But i kinda like it.

Your writing style is flawless. I love how you can perfectly portray the reality of the situation with such few words. I mean, people usually think that using large vocabulary and never-ending sentences makes a writer more skilled or sophisticated, but I personally feel that less is more. Great work as always!

Wow! I'm very impressed. Lots of layers in this fic, and I'm not entirely sure I understood it al, but the fact that I enjoyed reading this even without understanding it is a testament to how great you write!

holy shit! i almost not wanting to read it until the end.. sasuke and kiba? no seriously? but all well end well.. heheheh thank you for the story..:)

I read it through once and was hella confused. Then I read it twice, following the numbers. Was I supposed to follow the numbers? Cuz to me it made more sense:)
Omg sasukiba is hot. Never thought of this couple til now...

omg oMG OMG OMG OMG I'M SO GLAD YOU WROTE THIS

guh

MY HEART

stop being beautiful and perfect it's breaking me in the best way

WOW NOPE
I DID NOT
NEED THAT
I DIDN'T
WHAT THE FUCK KIND OF BIRTHDAY PRESENT IS THAT
I REPEAT:
NOTHING AND NO ONE IS HAPPY AT THE END
YOU ARE A TERRIBLE PERSON AND I LOVE YOU TO DEATH WOW MY HEART HURTS

there should have been more dick-suckings.

also i have been taking shots for you since i turned eighteen, doorknob.