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Lol, I always like stories that are from Mike's point of view~! Actually, I just like stories that have Mike in them, even briefly! After all, John and Sherlock would probably never have found each other without him~!

I really enjoyed this! I liked that Mike was **literally** the catalyst that both Sherlock and John needed. I liked his friendship with both men and how he realized that it would take a certain kind of person to room with Sherlock. I also appreciate you fleshing out John's background more and showed us readers his inner strength.

Good work! :)

Very cool idea to give us Mike's view of their encounter. Thanks for sharing it.

I like it. Nice job :)

A lovely written piece. I quite liked it.

Great job!

What a cool pov to choose! I liked Mike here, the personality you wrote him with was perfect for the little we saw in the pilot, but you also fleshed him out quite a bit.

THAT! WAS! AWESOME!

It was great to see the meeting and the little "behind the scenes" that we don't get to see in the show. And seeing it from Mike's perspective was really unique.

Not many authors write from his POV. I greatly enjoyed this!

loved this! omg! this part of the show and books has always been my favorite scene, when the two boys meet for the first time. And you've taken a great prospective and translated into written word so well! wonderful! i had to read it twice! and favorite it cause i loved it that much!

What an excellent view of teh back story here - you rarely get a glimpse into the life of Mike Stamford - maybe we should all include him a little more?
Brilliant as ever
JAL :D