I usually don’t write much reviews or comments , but I would like to say that I very thoroughly enjoyed this story. Like you, I was also looking for a good Decepticon story that wasn’t repetitive and rushed. I had found your story only a week ago, and decided to give it a try. Right away I was hooked, so much so that it had to binge read through the story during my free and off times from work. This is an amazing story and I would really like for you to continue the story the way you have been. I also want to make a small remark to not let people like a certain ‘Guest’ reviewer ruin what you took the time and effort to make. Out of the rest of us readers that enjoyed your story for what it was, that person is irrelevant. As you said, if that person wanted your story some type of way or just didn’t like it, that person could leave and write their own story or read another’s. I know it will take time for you make more chapter’s as you balance your daily life and free time. But again, I have very much enjoyed your story and I would love to see more of it to it’s completion. Until then, thank you very much for righting such a captivating story and I hope to read more in the future when you return.

You may not ever update this again, but I want you to know how much I enjoyed your story. This is the best movie Megatron fic I have ever read.

Well... that’s a relief I thought her dad was will

This is the best movie Megatron story out there. It started out kind of rough, but you improved with each chapter. Well done!

I don't think any less of you. In fact, quite the opposite. To bring to light the bad behavior of this guy was something that probably took a lot of guts. (I mean, I don't know you, so maybe it didn't.)

The fact that you are disheartened by bad reviews(demands) is normal for a writer. Coming from one who is writing sevarl books myself, I get it. I have a full story posted and a sequel in progress. Critiques can help us to see how to improve our works, but you are completely right, they have NO right to demand anything.
Helpful suggestions in a politely worded reviews? By all means suggest away! Demand to add/change a character to fit their bill? Take that behavior, put it in a basket, and dropkick it to Heck.
I know that people can be vicious, and it can hurt. Just, do your best to ignore them. If you see a guest review like that again, delete it. There is no reason for you to suffer simply because someone can't take the hint of, "don't like, don't read".

I for one enjoy this story, so keep it up! And at YOUR pace, not at anyone else's
Peace!
~Silverleone

"King Con"

I cackled. And dudes don't generally cackle. *squints eyes* well played...*Slowly moves off screen*

XD

Very well executed

Don't see many of these. Nice work

hello Mia im a reader of your works and im sorry for all the other negative feedback you have got on this story, in truth i loved it from the moment i started reading and i just want to say you have talent in writing and if you use it on fanfiction or original works will we just as awe worthy as the next

This is truly an amazing piece of literature. I may have stumbled across it a little late but none the less I believe it has become one of my favorite fan fics in the transformers fandom. We hardly ever get to see love stories from the Decepticons POV let alone Megatrons. Your writing is absolutely fabulous, the world you paint with your words is one of a kind. Thank you for taking your time to write such a wonderful story for those of the fandom to enjoy. I hope to one day see how the rest of this lovely story plays out. You are awesome to me. :3

Hello, it's me
Hello, can you hear me?
Hello from the outside.
Hello, how are you?
It must of been a thousand years since you've uuupdate.
LoL. Keep up the good work.

(to the "guest" below me) cool it Belinda and take a nap. But thanks for giving us a good laugh today!

V

Good Lord. I don't know who this person is who is bothering you, but if you are that easily offended, find yourself a safe space and quit writing. People are too sensitive these days. Find yourself another hobby, and join the legions of Transformers authors who never finish their stories. Be glad there are people who give a damn about your story in the first place.

FIRST OF ALL screw anyone who has ever been a complete dick to you about how your story should go. I mean seriously, your story is beautifully put together. I love your story as does everyone else who has had the privilege to read are some many words that i can tell you about how i feel for this story, So here's a list of reasons why everyone should show you respect and appreciation...
1. You seem like an amazing person first off. The way that you treat your readers is by far the best that i've seen from some poeple that i know.
2. Your story is so well put together that i feel like i'm watching a movie sometimes. The way that you make your characters come to life is astounding!
3. Megatron and the rest of the cybertronians that you have in this story are so alike to their characters on screen.
4. Annabelle is inspiring! She's definitely my favourite character out of your story, i love how she is so utterly human around the cons. Like when she has moments where she's pissed, scared or any other human emotion, she's just so imperfectly perfect that i really adore her. Especially her relationship with the cons!
5. I really REALLY love how it seems like your merging two movies together ( AND IF NOT, MY BAD FOR READING DIFFERENT)
Overall this story is amazing and it definitely helps me escape from reality when i need it most.

I truly Applaud you, Mia. This story is clearly from your Heart and us readers can see that, I also love how you connect the characters and give them their own back ground stories. Anna's character is from your mind and heart, a very well-beautiful- written character that balances Megatron. I love how you kept the story going, especially since Galvatron and Cemetary Wind aren't in this story..Never did like them. But I adore this story and we all understand that you have a life. This Guest should apologize and just enjoy this wonder story, your very own story. We all look forward to any new chapters about Megs and Anna! Sincerely, a Dear Fan and Reader.