Everyone is so in character it’s honestly beautiful. If u ever want to update the story I’ll be waiting:) even then this honestly feels right. Percy back to being a hero, Leo going back to doing what he loves and the start of Alex’s adventure. Much love ️

This is beautiful I can’t wait to read the rest of it

Alex is one of the best OCs written and I hope you will continue even after 5 years of hiatus. Please do consider continuing .. love to see how the story ends .

master ?

Sigh. Not again. Curse you writer! I’m beginning to think I shouldn’t read any more stories shorter than a certain amount of chapters. Now my long list of stories I like that aren’t finished is gaining another story. This it great but unfinished. I’m gonna follow it and fav it just in case you decide to update or leave an note. Damn it I wanna know what happens. I agree tho about the last chapter with one of the other commenters percy has already showed the painting so it was a bit odd. Other than that it’s great. Also just saying to whoever said that about Annabeth I highly doubt she’s the soldier cus it said “he” unless it’s a mistake/misdirect/I read wrong

i would say plz update but it’s your choice. I just really hope you do tho.

I'm really hoping Annabeth isn't the one leading the army...I don't want to see her go evil..Please update soon!

It's good but the last chapter is a bit inconsistent, Percy already showed them the portrait and he already explained them it's a trap and camp Jupiter is getting invaded .wishing you would continue this story ...

They're right...I think the fandom is dying. Some update less and less until the time they completely forget about their story. But don't worry, the readers are there to support you, no matter what you do. Still looking forward for the next updates!

Awesome story! I hope you continue this. I think its really good

I know it's been ages but honestly I keep hoping for more of this story. It's the best fanfic on this site and I've read hundreds. You've probably moved on from this story and maybe the whole PJO series but I still feel the need to tell you this. Is the story up for adoption? These first 17 chapters I'd add or change just small bits and pieces to keep it canon considering HoH and BoO. I've thought of some ideas for this story and how it may end (this is my third time reading it) , and I'd love writing them and finishing this story. But I'd still be a first time writer and might ruin your work. If you feel up to finishing yourself that would be even better and I'd pm you my ideas if you are on a writer's block so you could consider them. So what do you say? ;)

Wheres blackjack?

Ah hate to be the one to point this out. But cyclops are supposed to be fire proof, or at the very least flame resistant. So the whole burning it wouldn't work.

It's been 2 years since the last update , I have read the story for atleast 4 times...never got bored...pls consider updating or giving for adoption

what's up with the whole master Chiron stuff?

Please write more. I know its been a while but this the best fanfic I have read in a long.