What?! I just finished reading chapter 2 and how dare you say the chat room part was boring, I personally found it hilarious! Going to follow and fav, that's how much I like this story so far :)

Do you wanna know when I started reading this? 1 in the morning. IT'S 5 IN THE MORNING! I wish to thank you for this wonderful story, and BTW, I'm a male who plays Smash Bros. every day. I know this is over 10 years old, but its in my top 3 favorites. Once again, thank you.

YEAH, awesome story so far

Man Peach is really EVIL! Who does this to their best friend!? And over a boy too?

FUCKING MALON! MARTH FUCK HER! MALON YOU LITTLE BITCH SO UGLY IT MAKES EVERYONE HURL EVEN ROY! SHE IS NOT EVEN A PRINCESS! A PRINCE IS SUPPOSED TO MARRY A PRINCESS! (Except for Link and Zelda, Zelink fan!) MALON IS SO FRICK'IN FAT AND UGLY SHE EVOLVED FROM A TUB OF LARD AND WHEN SHE WAS IN A POKEMON BATTLE SHE TIPPED AND THE WATER FLEW OUT OF THE STADIUM! MALON IS SO FAT DORA COULD EVEN EXPLORA! (EXPLORE HER!)

No no no. Marth aint gay

Marth is not gay. Pair him with Samus or Daisy

Peach beats Zelda. No way

EVERYONE HATES PEACH. XD
this chapter was really cute. Keep up the good work! :D

Malon and Roy one of the worst couples ever, seriously if you don't drop that I am going to get people to sue you

That is so not true! You are an awesome writer! You've kept my attention for this long and I have an AWFUL case of ADD (I can't focus on anything nowadays) I'm exited for the rest of your story! I am going to be writing a story similar to yours so I need to focus on as many details as possible without completely copying someones work. I am a super huge fan of SSB personally so this is awesome!

*Vomits* Oh holy shit I don't want to question people's logic but it's gone ways too far *Takes a deep breath* NUMBER ONE MALON AND ROY ARE NOT A COUPLE IT JUST ISN'T POSSIBLE NUMBER 2 ON YOUTUBE THIS PERSON THAT DID PEACH AND ROY I WAS MAD AND WAS VOMITING *Talks at normal voice tone* At school I was yelling at my best friend when 3 other classes were outside about this Pikachu 206's response was "Malon and Roy" "YES ISN'T THAT STUPID" then the next response was "And Peach and Roy defenitley not" "I KNOW RIGHT"

,hey everyone my pen name is seen almost everywhere now but I've come here to laugh because if you seen Lyra from pokemon heartgold or soulsilver she has red hair Malon has the same colour of hair so theese are some explanations why Malon and Roy should not be a couple
has chestnut red hair and Roy has actuall red hbair
2. when Malon has a dream somewhere in this story,they use swords but Malon doesn't know how to use a sword
doen't have fiery hair this kinda goes with number one of my opinion

OK on ssbm roy should be replaced with eliwood example of marth is a teen when roy is a kid shouldn't marth be old when roy is a teen

totally agree with u