Oh wow... that does sound sinister. I can't wait to read about Apocalypse Boy! :D

This 'Fallen Triangle' is a real mystery to me and I'm really itching to know more. You are evil and great keeping me wanting to find out more.

Some strange imagery here:
"heart beating a panicky tattoo", but it really works, particularly with the weird not-Callum thing afterwards.

I can't wait to find out what happens to Callum. How will he be their's (I know you can't answer that, but oh well...)?
:)

intriguing... I wonder what happened to Laura
Your explanation of the Zero Room seems to be perfectly reasonable, particularly since he was in a sort of upset mood, as if he was seeking calm (he did suggest the Eye of Orion) :)

I really like how this story is going so far :)
Didn't the Doctor blow up the Zero Room in Castrovalva?

Liked like how you put in the trinagle back in the story are using the new cybermen and are you doing the next bit to the story will we see Callum family in this at all live to see the reaction to the doctor

I'm glad you brought in another reference to 'The Triangle' again (to be honest I was starting to forget about it). Anyway, another great chapter and I can't wait to find out more, particularly about what's going to happen to the Doctor (love the time eddy) :)

I can't wait to see what your going to do with the Cybermen. I am also looking forward to finding out where and when in the universe (where on Earth just doesn't fit for this :) ) the Doctor is.

nice

Good way to end love the banter between Alex and Calum will Callum learn about the doctors secret or his name

Can't wait for the 'Meanwhile in the TARDIS'!
Hope to see Alex around again :)

I think Callum has really got the idea about life with the Doctor. Still 58% is over half :)

When the next chapter coming ? And I think Callum becoming smarter then the doctor

The idea of a Death Vortex certainly sounds interesting... and a little bit horrible, but that's what makes a good story! :)