I'm crying and also you wrote the thing that definitely happened. Poor Melody!

I don't do threesome fic as a rule and I skip past everything that reminds me of River, but you just justified a threesome in the most beautiful way imaginable, damn you!

I have to say that I just found your amazing writing today. I completely devoured Epistolary, I consumed Come And Knock, and I had to, HAD TO read this one. Your writing is convincing, brilliantly breathtaking- the way you portray 11, Amy and Rory and River is just... astounding. I have completely gone head-over-heels for your stories, and I say to you- WELL DONE. Thank you so, so much for your amazing gifts of writing. Thank you.

I understand exactly what you mean, but I'm really glad you came back to this story. I still remember it, even though its been almost a year. I'm not sure if you realize how much I love your stories, but maybe this can give you a better idea. Actually, this chapter not only made sense, it was really well written. And I don't think I will ever understand how you write these wisdom-filled chapters that ACTUALLY make sense! In a way, these chapters are my favorite. :) I'm sorry I haven't reviewed for so long. I've been busy too. But keep on writing and I will always keep reading! :)

Pls do more

EEEEEEKKKK! I've waited so long for this! SO LONG! So worth it though! I am so excited you finally posted, I check almost every day to see if you updated, just when I thought you wouldn't, you did! I am. So glad you aren't abandoning! Please please keep this going, I love this so much and quite honestly you didn't bite off more than you can chew, this story is simply fantastic! I love you, I love your work, keep up the good work! 3

Any good. To tell the truth it wasn't any good. IT WAS PERFECT. Every time you gift us with another chapter I am again impressed with your writing and your characters. Because no matter what the disclaimer must say this Rory is yours. He is much deeper and more well written than Moffat's. He is of course still Rory, but he is a wiser, even more lovable Rory that I am so grateful you have decided to share with us. As easy as it may be to doubt yourself, know that we love what you do and encourage you to continue in any and every way you choose.

Oh, this was fabulous. I definitely missed your writing! This gives me an excuse to go back through your stories again (but this time I'm not avoiding thesis writing!) Thanks for sticking with it.

Thank you so much for the update and sticking with it! Excited as ever for more 3

This was great, you wrote the Dream Lord so well!

THIS WAS THE MOST PERFECT CHAPTER I HAVE EVER READ ASDFGHJKL HEADCANON ACCEPTED FOR AMY AND RORY'S FIRST TIME. THE LADY AT THE SHOP WHEN HE WAS BUYING CONDOMS OMG AND THEN WHEN HE HAD THE MOMENT WITH RIVER. I CAN'T.

It was great. Honestly. Just pure genius. Loved Rory's story, loved the whole thing. You still have it, don't give up!

Hey!
Awesome work with this chapter! I've really missed this story and the fact that you're trying to get back into it counts for everything!
(I'm also loving the Rory insights!)
I hope you can keep going, it's such a unique plotline to every other Dr Who thing out there!

This was just a breath of fresh air, an entirely eloquent one. Thank you for not giving up on this story, even if it takes you so long to update. :)

Happy writing, and take all the time you need!

Areslin

it is awful when you loose your thread, but I do love this story, I'm so glad you have tried to take it up again!, as always this chapter was brilliant! and you are a fantastic writer, keep up the awesome work! :)