please continue

Can't wait for more. Please update soon.

Awesome story so far. I love that you didn't create another smart witch to be in Gryffinder with the boys. It annoys me when people do that because I think it takes away from Hermione being the brightest with of her age. Her figuring things out helped her earn that title. This is a fantastic story and I can't wait until the next update.

I really enjoy this story, i really like the parts about Hermione's brother in particular. I hope you will update again soon. Xo

Oi eu sou uma leitora brasileira e gostei muito da sua história, posta logo por favor

Very interested in seeing how you plan on turning this somewhat horrific version of our favorite bushy-haired witch into the bookworm we all know and love!

-John

I like your story. The premise is neat, Hermione as a pure blood growing up as Draco's friend. I like the older brother trying to help her out. It was nice to see her in the mix heading towards the stone. I'll be looking forward to how you go with this.

I spoke too soon

If Hermione is going to be completely different from the original then you might as well have written a self-insert story

Very good chapter, you can see the threads starting to come together. Looking forward to the next one!

Interesting idea of Hermione as a pure blood friend of the Malfoys.

One tiny comment on grammar, as an old English teacher. 'Wove' is the past tense of 'weave', as to make cloth. Ex. Yesterday I wove cloth to make your cloak, today I will weave cloth to make your dress robes.

The past tense of 'wave' is 'waved'. Ex. Yesterday I waved my wand and all the leaves turned red and gold. Today I will wave my wand and make the flowers bloom.

Be glad if you are a native English speaker, because the only way to know tenses and plurals of words is to memorize them. The English language is horribly irregular. Why are these words spelled 'phone' and 'fish' ? Why is the plural of 'mouse' 'mice, the plural of 'goose' 'geese' and the plural of ' moose' is 'moose'? And then, why is one a 'house' and more than one 'houses'?

Hey I love the idea of this story and like what you've done so far although I don't like how jarring the swing from chapter to chapter is? I know you don't want it to be a continuous story but I feel like even a little bit more cohesiveness would be helpful. Going from where we were in 4 to 5 was kind of like whoa, what? Also gives less time for characterization/development which you had in the first chapter.

I really do like this so hope you keep going. Looking forward to the next one.

Me encantan este tipo de historias, una dark-hermione me fascina. Para mi este tipo de historias tienen muchísimo potencial pero corren peligro de caer en los "cliches" clásicos de siempre; sin embargo tengo mucha confianza puesta en ti y creo que podrías hacer una gran historia.
La mejor de las suertes, y si me va gustando hasta ahora, plis no cambies.

I read it and it is amazing hope you update soon

What an interesting idea! :) It's great to read that despite Hermione's snobbishness and her Slytherin-like characteristics, there's still a little bit of the original Hermione in her - the one who wants extra credit in assignments and consistently tops her class. Her distaste for Crabbe and Goyle, coupled with her conversations and friendship with Draco and Pansy are absolutely spot on and feels very natural. I'd love to read about how you'll slowly include her interactions with Harry and Ron as well. How are you planning on continuing the story - Hermione's life in Hogwarts throughout the years or will Hermione slowly form a friendship with the Golden Trio (Golden Duo, in this case?) or a relationship with Draco?

P.S. The Slytherin common room's password is Pureblood! I love that! Do update!