| Reviews for Black Angel Six: The Headhunter Protocol |
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   Polygr chapter 1 . 7/28/2016 Called six hehe |
| BlueIndolence chapter 18 . 8/28/2015 This story is radical in the sense that (besides the main character) the only one to survive the sci-fi/survival horror flick is the black guy. I totally did not see that coming. |
| Guest chapter 18 . 8/9/2015 Just leave Lucian in the escape pod... xP |
| Malleus08 chapter 18 . 7/30/2015 Just found this story and I'm glad I did. Great plot, the fights were awesome,and the twist at the end was unexpected. 10/10 |
| Guest chapter 18 . 6/22/2015 This is a beautiful piece of literature and you should be proud of it |
| Kenshin1340 chapter 18 . 6/30/2014 Fantastic. How long did it take you to write all of this? I read it in 3 and a half hours... but it obviously took significantly longer to write... And it's spectacular. You've earned a top spot in authors from me, if that means anything- off to check out your profile. -Skij |
| Kenshin1340 chapter 17 . 6/30/2014 So she is the main revolve. Everyone dies? Different than what I was expecting ;( Oh well :/ -Skij |
| Kenshin1340 chapter 13 . 6/30/2014 That was certainly a shocker. I didn't expect Riven to die, but then I forgot that this wasn't completely Riven-centric. Not to mention time spent on GOT has reminded me main characters can die whenever the author feels like. Interesting... Onwards! -Skij |
| Kenshin1340 chapter 7 . 6/30/2014 Deep shit. A lot of these fics can be made into movies for Riot... Something tells me if Riot had a billion dollars they could do some fun stuff -Skij |
| Kenshin1340 chapter 4 . 6/30/2014 Dope. Man. Now I feel insecure about my Kha fic even though it's not quite the same genre. :( -Skij Onwards! |
| Kenshin1340 chapter 1 . 6/30/2014 Oh man- this is freaking awesome. A friend told me about this- I'm writing my own Kha'zix fic (serial killer, already intelligent) but I LOVE origin stories and yours is pretty sweet considering all of the other stuff you've put it into make it amazing. Onwards I go! -Skij |
| TheGadgetFish chapter 18 . 6/19/2014 Hollly crap, what a ride! This was recced to me by Viper of Grand this afternoon, and I couldn't stop reading. I loved the development of Kha'zix, and the action scenes were intense and compelling. Wow. Many kudos to you. |
| Viper of Grand chapter 18 . 6/11/2014 ;_; Ireliaaaaa whyyyyyyyyyy With that out of the way, glad to see that you finished it up mate! Hope to see you around the forums! Congrats on a job well done! Why Irelia why?! |
| Guest-san chapter 18 . 6/10/2014 I was actually surprised at the scene where Yi's wife laughed out the report, well I really love how she did it at the end of the scene. Hehe :D To the main point: I really love how this story has gone through. Random times of telling the BG... yeah, yeah, w/e. But I see some mistakes with the grammar, hey I got no prob on that I can still understand 'em lol. I just wanted to tell ya that this story is one of my favourites here in LoL section :) Keep up the good work! |
| cerealkiller49 chapter 17 . 6/9/2014 OOOOOOH MAN. This was good stuff. Only a few errors like when Riven sent Irelia into the vacuum of space, there's a line that reads "From instead the ship...". I'm sure you meant to say inside the ship. Also, when Lucian was looking at the final blast door, there is a line that reads "he didn't want to so close to her...". But that's just nitpicking. As for everything else, it was superb, as usual. The deaths of Irelia and Du Couteau brought a nice sense of closure and explained some of the back story. What happened with Yi at the end was nice (;)) and unexpected (at least for me, I never see these things coming). I can't wait to see what you have in store for the grand finale. |
