an amazing story that I'm sad to see end. though I do very much want to read the next part of this. and having played Raising Hell the ending makes perfect sense.

wow can't believe this story is coming to an end soon. so will overlord 2 be on this story or will you make a seperate one for that one?

I hadn't until you recommended it...and I really don't know what to do with kids either...but you have to admit you do like torturing her...and besides I don't really know of a viable way to put her in Overlord 2. guess that's why YOU'RE doing the writing here :)

Oh dear, I do hope Rose survives and that Sol will now aid Kaern in the final battle, unless you believe that fight is one to be settled between the two Overlords and their minions.

You are not alone in the love of Dragon Age Inquisition I assure you.

Still keenly interested in this story and look forward to the next chapter.

wow, I'm a bit miffed with myself in that I didn't read this earlier. a very great story but I do have a question, if Rose dies would Sol be the mother of the Overlad?

Wow. Toby is a sick bastard. I'm not sure if he even cares about Sol. He's so awful to her. And Gnarl. Ugh. I really hate him. They're both so mean to poor Sol. At least Toby was in pain. That was very satisfying. Anyway, this was another great chapter. Keep up the good work.

Great new chapter. :)

next chapter please

wow this is evil i can't imagine this just being sol and telling the people they will die a slow and painful death and she doesn't care if a man's wife died or not that's really sad but any way good job

WOOOOOOOWWW! I had read through all of this, and it's amazing. Sol and her whole race of people are all kinds of amazing, and whether or not they're actually part of the more, they sure as hell seems like it should be.

really well written. I am enjoying this story very much with all the twists in the plot. anxious for the rest lol.

Will sol's story end in overlord 2 era Or have you ever thought of doing your own interpretation of what overlord 3 would have been like?

Yep. I'm an idiot.

Hmm, interesting. I did not foresee Velvet dying so you have already surprised me. I will admit seeing Sol fighting Toby does seem rather more promising a fight while the two Overlords wage their own battle.

Will there be a seuqel to this with Toby as the antagonist?