Reviews for Top of the World |
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![]() ![]() Hi! Very very very belated birthday. Lol. I've noticed who u r using angel with a shotgun references. I love the song too. Btw amazing fanfic. Long live Jemily~! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Can you make a prequel to this? like how it all strated before Emily was destined to be Xandred's gem and how Jonathon and Lilia met and their friendship grew together..please? |
![]() ![]() ![]() in chapter 18 (The Bulllzord) it says that the very first red ranger which is Kohaku tight the bonds between the yellow and red rangers and the purpose for setting it tight so that whatever torment that yellow rangers go through the red rangers will always be there to help, how come they fell in love with each other? |
![]() ![]() ![]() why jayden and emily fell in love with each other? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Update more chapters about this story,because it's the best,extra and the great story that I was reading about it,and I am also starting to love and to like reading to this story. So can you please write more chapters,because I want to know what happens in the next chapters about it. THANKS SO MUCH FOR WRITTEN TO THIS STORY,thanks so much about it.&&&£££%%%$$$ |
![]() ![]() Angel with a shotgun by the Cab, that is my favorite band. This is a really good story btw. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Where's the Trickster's Treat part? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fantastic story, a great read through out. Only criticism would be Emily seemed to of taken just about all the other characters moments but it's your story and you can do what ever you like and as I said this story was a really great read. Later. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story so far, I've been enjoying it so far. Although I was a little disappointed that Jayden didn't duel Kevin but Emily duelling Kevin instead was a nice change. I'm mostly reviewing at this point with so much of the story still to go is mostly to vent, as I don't really think Mike deserved to get the Beetle disk especially at Mia's expense as I thought Ji and Jayden made a fantastic choice in choosing her. I do like this episode as it was a needed learning experience for Mike, Ji and the rest of the Team but how wasn't Mia worthy to have the Disk after all her hard work and dedication. Mike could of always gained another Disk further down the line, also annoyed me that out of all the Disks and Zoids both female members of the Team never got more than 1 while all the male members had at least 2 (except for Lauren who inherited all of Jayden's for a short period). I mean the Shark disk could of been handed off to another member of the Team rather than be left largely unused. Anyway sorry to vent and I'm going to get back to reading this so far great story. Later. |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG. I so love this! You did not discard this work. You worked hard on 33 long chapters! You're grammar is absolute perfect. And I understand you worked hard. And I am so happy about the pairings! I am making you my favorites author of all time! Thanks a million! |
![]() ![]() Your every power ranger stories are awesome. When you will write Samurai power ranger story sisters? please write it as soon as possible. |
![]() ![]() ![]() No! Jayden, don't leave Emily! She'll be lost without you! :'( |
![]() ![]() ![]() AHH! Jayden asked Emily on a date! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Curses, Mentor! They were gonna kiss, and you ruined it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Gosh, Deker sure knows how to hit the nail on the head. Threatening to hurt Emily if Jayden didn't fight him? That's just cruel... Thank goodness Jayden stopped him. |