Du staem, that was remarkable! I am an Erik fan, so it brought me a pleasing feeling to know that he finally got over (an unworthy) Christine, and moved on to a more understanding..., well, Erik like figure. I love how you switched points of view and it was immensely heart warming to see that someone else (meaning someone other than me) felt the story from a love desperate, deformed beauty-no matter how "phychotic he may be/has been-deserves love and happiness. And a child! Very well done, indeed. Write on!
-your humble servant,
AW
(I love Erik's note sign off! Erik adoration!) :)

OMG *crying* nice happy ending! im so proud of them, and its true authoress your a pretty good writer in my opinion, and if you ever did make a sequel ill be looking out for it but for now im in love with this original chapter, not to metion that you made the oc character had flaws was magnificent. well GOODBYE!

Just lovely!

What a lovely story! *Squees* Sad it's over, but I'm excited!

Great ending. :) Bravo!

Well, I wasn't quite right, but I love it. :) Great job.

It's quite good, very intriguing.

oh erik, dear something erik he and his revenge! really angelique better tell her feelings fast or else...there might be trouble! anyway i think you shoul make a sequel but if erik and angelique did get together say there has to be a sequel you know about thier lives as a couple and getting used to the crowds PIERRE MUST BE THERE AS WELL! but that is if your planning to make a seuel. UPDATE SOON!

Yay! :)

Great chapter...lots of detail...characters believable. I'll be looking forward to that sequel. :)

And now you have my too curious...how is this "revenge" going to turn out? Will it draw Angie and the Phantom together-or throw them apart? My guess is the latter followed by the first. In the next-to-last and last chapters, respectively. Am I close? :P

oh pierre he is offically one of my favorte characters! and second of all loving the erik/pierre bromance, i hope to see more soon authoress kay. anyway this is going to be bad once the girl who got away comes over and has to celebrate angeliques sister engangement party. UPDATE SOON!

Oh my gosh! I'm so enamored of this story, and I'd love you to update it soon! I loved the lines

"Psychotic? Daae, de Chagny? What…" Pierre had snuck up on us and had been listening all along. His eyes widened as he connected the dots—he had heard the story; all of Paris had. His mouth moved silently for a few minutes before he finally managed to choke out, "I just ordered my sister to marry the Phantom of the Opera. What is wrong with me?"

"You just told me to name a girl Pierre. That's what should get you to ask what's wrong with you," I retorted, hoping to snap him out of it.

aaaawwww i was really hoping that they would confess but your right to both of them, they are still confused! im really sorry that i havent reviewed in a while. i really hope that you would forgive me. but anyway im thinking that you are improving your writing better and angeliques role is AWESOME! update soon!

Oh, that was so cute! I loved this chapter. Tee-hee. It's funny that he calls her "Angie." I've said it once, I'll say it again: I HATE Erik/OC stories, but this one is just so perfect and sweet and innocent and lovely that I just can't help going back to it. The fact that Angelique is flawed is one of the best parts!

You're welcome for the review! I thought it sounded a little brusque (sorry! :P) but I'm really glad you liked it! And I'm glad it made your day. It's true; this story is one that I really look foreword to. Every time I see that it's been updated, I get so excited. And this was wonderful! Do update soon!

-Novi