Hope there will be rewrite...It was interesting...

You bastard! I feel betrayed. Boo hoo
Oh well. I'm off to read some Zoop

I'm sorry to hear that you're ending the story as I thought it was going really well. Even if you choose not to upload it, you should still write out the rest of it. While you're writing, a solution may come to you on how to fix the characters/story or inspiration may take your story in a direction that you never expected. I hope you keep writing because you're good at it. :)

Wow I really enjoyed those chapters, im sorry to hear that was probably the end. I really enjoyed reading it, lol I might just go and play my priest and wonder in the barrnes for a little wile! Lol I love cross faction love stories!

I really liked this story. Hope you feel up to continue this story in the future.

Awww. I really was loving this one. Hope you are able to continue one day. If you do, I would love it if you could notify me. I would love to read your work in any form. :D

It's been 3 years now dude. Make chapter threeeeeeeeeeeee

make chapter 3 pleaseee

When is chapter three happening? This is good.

plz do chp 3 soon.

plz do chp 3 soon

Plz do chp 3

It was just getting to the good stuff too! If you ever come back to this know that there's plenty of us that'll enjoy your work.

Nooooo this hasn't been updated for 2 years nooooo ;-;

Ha it ended just as we're getting to the good stuff! Hope you come back to this one day.

I like the characters, their attraction and their personalities are fun to read.