Thank you for telling us rather than just taking your stories off. But I don't see this fic under that pen name on AO3. Please post it all soon!

I read this all in one sitting...absolutely brilliant story, let me just say. You capture the dynamics of Emma and Hook perfectly. I enjoyed having Hook's point of view, and seeing him trying to tread carefully, to figure Emma out...and then, you know, her completely whamming him with her own deductions of him. Basically, I love the direction you took with this. Great read!

(On another note entirely, I have a bad habit of reading old, abandoned, and incomplete stories on this site, and have since learned that it is usually pointless to ask for an update. However, I also have an incurable sense of optimism, so I am going to ask anyways. Please, I am left on a cliffy, and I would love to see this continued!)

I just discovered this story. I read all of it in a single sitting. I'm sad to see that you haven't updated it in a long time, because you did a great job capturing the characters and where they were emotionally at that time. Did you get stuck? I'd be happy to talk about the story with you, if you need someone to bounce ideas off of.

Please write more of this! This is the first well-written and critical "Emma & Hook team up post-beanstalk" fic I have ever read and I would hate for it to end up an unfinished WIP!

more more!

I love the story. I'm impressed by how in character you've kept everyone.

I'm enjoying this story. Will there be an update?

interesting story

I truly enjoyed this chapter and the progression of Captain Swan. Thanks!

I was going to do a review for every chapter, like you so wonderfully do for me, but I was too eager to get to the next chapter. I read all of it in one sitting. Obviously, I like your story ;-)

great update!

Hello peaceHeather,
Just to put it out there are a very good writer. U said your do editing, have u ever put out your own story, because like I said you a very good writer.
You stay very true to the characters as they are in the show.
I hope you can keep your motivation to write up because you story is a lot of fun to read.
I hope u update soon.

love it update soon xxx

Oh that was good :)

I like where you're going with this. Hope your muse let's you continue it :)