Monday, July 8, 2019-9:57 pm CST

Dear Saiken2009,

I have read 46 chapters of this story. It is very good. I'm no author, but since you have 71 chapters in this story, you oughta make a novel, and sell it as a book. It's that good.

Sincerely,

Terry Marvin (Dallas, Texas, USA)

P.S. I getting ready to read some more of the story..

Rats Of Unusual Sizes! I love it! Every story needs a little Princess Bride reference :)

Oh.. I seriously feared that it wouldn't end nice, but I'm happy how it turned out :)
I really enjoyed this story

The landings through time remind me of another tv show years ago called Voyagers. The time travelers never knew exactly where they would land and often had rough landings. It was a fun show and the landings of the Monkees remind me of this. I love this with the Titanic!

Awwww, what a lovely ending with Peter leaving the milk out and Micky hugging Mr Babbitt. A truly wonderful story. I loved it. The story went for ages in their time though, almost a whole year I think!

Oh no, Piper!

Sweet chapter

Did they have CPR in the sixties? They didn't have it in the 50's but they definitely had it by the 80's. I'm not sure.

Excellent chapter! It had started getting a bit boring but this chapter has brought it back onto the right track.

I was right about the swamp being from the Princess Bride. The one with copying the notes sounds like this thing from The Legend of Zelda:Spirit Tracks where you have to play a tune on a pan flute(I think that is what it is called) to unlock another area on the world map.

This swamp forest place sounds a lot like the fire swamp in the Princess Bride. The rat-bears are the Rodents Of Unusual Size, there was this quicksand type thing in the Princess Bride that I think was called Soft-sand and I'm pretty sure there was something that spurted up out of the ground.

Great ending to a great story :D I am so glad that the boys and piper made their way home safely after all the things they had to go through just to stop the devil who will hopefully leave them alone at least for a while . I can't wait to start reading the sequel whenever you decide to begin writing one. Will definitely be looking forward to more

Nice way to end the story, I liked it. It was a great run. :)

Really loved it! Even with it being so long it was exciting all the way through! So happy our boys and piper made it home on and that they are being watched over :-) very well done my dear!

Bravo! That was an excellent ending to the story! The sequel i'm sure will be just as good.