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sweet! :)

Aw! This was great, I loved it.:)

Absolutely amazing! Such a sweet story! I absolutely loved it! I love the detail and the emotions and the story line and everything about it! I love the way you made them interact perfectly! Beautiful job with this story!

Oh my gosh that was adorable! :DD
Like..itwas and then he was-and she started-and the valentine-and the glitter-and the knights-and the PERFECTION. I died on the last two lines!
"She can have another heart.

She is so worth it."

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That's how amazing it was! :DD
I'm having a feeling EXPLOSION right now! Thank you for that. X)

Again, it was totally amazing! Actually, it was more than amazing, but I don't think there is a word in the English dictionary that can describe how I feel about this story.
Well there might be some fancy word...but I'm not going to look because there are way more interesting things than the dictionary to read. Like this story!
Don't ever quit writing! :D

S. Baudelaire ;)

You just mixed 2 themes together in one story, and it couldn't have been anymore perfect.

It was sweet and adorable and romantic and beautiful and it just killed me even more than the first part. His valentine. I just couldn't.

It was so cute how he was so afraid of ruining his friendship with her, and was keeping his head down almost all the time. It's a nice change to see an Austin like this one, not the crazy, SUPER confident guy that we always see. Here, he was just normal, and quiet, and in somehow, it felt like hse was having a quite an effect of him, not a total control of him, nope, just an effect. It was, touching, I guess you can say.

And how he was concerned about the fact that he tasted like pickles in their first kiss was just so adorable.

And the other fact that you can feel that even his parents wanted him together with Ally. I don't know, it was probably just me..

And then, when he makes the first move, you can feel that he suddenly got back his control on everything and became the confident guy that he is.

And I just loved how once in a while you mentioned the whole fantasy and Knight in shining armor.

This two-shots really made me feel a lot of emotions, literally.

Once again, it was perfect. Well done :)

I loved it! Especially the part about the valentine he made for her :) Great job!

"Why had fate not given him a flat tire?" Ehehehe love this :D

"There's only one more inch to go." OH MY GOSH great buildup :)

"She stands up." And I'm like NOOO.

"She moves that final inch." AHHH.

"She turns away." You suspense artist, you XD

"Looks like he'll have to make the first move again." WHEWWW.

Great, great work :)

Wonderful!

You. got. me. this. time. I cried. There were actual tears running down my cheeks.

I am literally speechless right now.

I swear, I actually cried. Like, it was bittersweet from the beginning, between their memories and how she's trying really hard not to shed a single tear about him, and even tho she's admitting she has a crush on him, she doesn't want him to know about it, and she's trying really hard to keep that going on, and she's just laying in bed thinking about all this, and suddenly, he's at her door stoop and there's just "tug and connect". I have never been, so got off guard like I am right now. And this is probably the perfect ending for a chapter that I've ever seen, I mean it.

Even tho it was told mostly from Ally's persfective, there were still some moments when Austin also felt the same way she was feeling at the moment or it showed that Austin, actually, returns those feelings, it wasn't explicit, and that's what made it special.

I am seriously speechless right now. I'll wrote you a very long review for the next chapter, I promise. I'm just out of words right now.

Awwww that is so so sweet that Austin made Ally a valentine then rushed over like a little boy in love to the girl of his dreams' house to give it to her.

that was just perfect! I love your style of writing...so unique and simple, yet beautiful all the same! I don't want to bombard you with requests, but I do have something in mind. I'll let you know after your next story!

LaNae Q.

Sweet!

That was really good! :)

This was beautiful :') Really. Angsty in the starting and finally ending with a perfect finish. I loved every bit of it! Amzing job! :)