Reviews for A Second Chance
Uzumaki spiral chapter 3 . 11/10/2019
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helrio uzugaku chapter 3 . 11/2/2018
Interesting concept, nicely written and endearing plot devices. I hope you haven't given up on this fic, it's got. Lot of potential. So long as it's longer than 3 or 4 chapters. If it followed the canon storyline it would be somewhat disappointing. Hope to see an update sometime soon.
lou2003us chapter 3 . 4/17/2018
I really want to see what happens next. Looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the great work!
TheNinetailedKing chapter 3 . 1/9/2018
please update its really good
Burning Moonlight chapter 3 . 7/25/2017
Cool fic. Update please. No Johnny in the story too, that's good.
NARUTO-UZUMAKI-NAMAKAZI chapter 3 . 1/25/2017
more chapters please because i really like this fanfic and please make it more than 3 to 9 chapters because you could add onto all of the previous things in the fanfiction and it would be even better.
Guest chapter 3 . 1/12/2017
Cccooooooonnntiiiiiiiiinuuuuuue plz
Guest chapter 3 . 1/2/2017
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EDM chapter 3 . 12/20/2016
Loving the interaction between Naruto and the other monsters.
Lucifall the Mad Warrior chapter 3 . 10/18/2016
Sooo when do i get our new chapter so i can read this and love it?
a chapter 3 . 9/1/2016
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godzillafan1 chapter 3 . 7/26/2016
not too bad I like mavis with Naruto hope there will be more chapters with them together please write them soon really soon.
Minato 1 chapter 3 . 5/18/2016
I really do hope you continue the concept is awesome.
917brat chapter 3 . 4/28/2016
this sounds very interesting and I would so love to read more of this to see just what is going to happen next.
Morgrim342 chapter 1 . 7/9/2015
...Did you just misspell marshmallows?
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