-Might be reading too much into it, but how Su Li is mentioned to never be noticed, is something I’m guessing is a reference to how obscure a character she actually is.

-Anyway, story is short, but manages to work within that timeframe, in that it uses its content to provide a basis for the relationship rather than portraying it as a pre-existing premise.

Awwwwww. This was very sweet and it was written rather well. I thought maybe you could have cut back on one of the "No, it happened..." paragraphs, but other than that, you did a wonderful job with this. We know very little about Su Li.

Great job.

I like this one - how short it is, but how much emotion it has. Good luck!

Lovely succient piece on the power & mystery of love :D As I've no doubt said before, I really appreciate your ability to create an effective & moving story in such a short space of words.