AHAHA this is great XD it feels like it's right out of the show.

I especially like the parts where Lassie and Jules said they would make them walk home XD

AHHHH WHY YOU DO THAT I HATE CLIFFIES XD *presses Next button*

This is SUCH a typical Shawn and Gus situation XD

Also, I realized I haven't read this one but to be fair there's lots of your fics I haven't read, whether it be here or PF. Also, I honestly prefer to read fics on when possible because I have make it white text on a black background, which is much easier for me to read. It's more calming for some reason. So I think I'll be sneaking around on right now XD

Oh yeah, the fic... It's going great right now, can't wait to read more XD Lassie is going to be pissssssed.

so now what?

ahhhhh cliff-hanger! please update soon!

I loved how Shawn delayed the carjackers just enough for the local police to arrive. Please continue.

DUDE! NOT COOL

Oh I love the cliff hanger. Please update soon.

I couldn't believe how you ended the chapter! Now you have no choice but to update quickly (like later today please). Although, it does let us imagine what Gus was about to say. I'm thinking maybe they are out in the middle of nowhere and the car is out of gas. The two villains had an accomplice who picked them up and now Shawn and Gus are stranded without phones and no one has tracked them-even themselves (which was brilliant to show because Shawn couldn't use the trick from "Shawn Takes A Shot In The Dark"-since Gus wouldn't kick out the tail light of Lassie's car for money and Lassie anger issues). Love this chapter and I am truly looking forward to the next chapter ;)

Nice

You are capturing the characters really well! I wonder what Gus was looking at...

Oh man, what did gus see? Did they strip the car? Or are there guys with guns? Ah c'mon you can't leave me hanging like this! Please update again real soon!

No matter what these two do there always in trouble. Now where could the car end up the wreckers, on a boat. where.

I hope what ever you personal troubles are, they are getting better.

Oh absolutely hilarious! I love it! Shawn actually does what he is told and still gets into trouble! Only Shawn! Please, please, please update again real soon!

AH! I love this! It's hilarious and COMPLETELY Shawn and Gus. PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I need to know what happens! Also, I'm a little confused about the whole trunk thing. Can you get to the trunk from the backseat? Because I think that's what they did. Anyway, great job!