Whoa! I've been searching this kind of story lol! Good

This was so good!
You must write more, please :D

so cute :)

YEIII haha awesome fic :D I always thought that Meredy and Ultear always tease Jellal for fun, great that others think the same. Keep it up

*-* Very cute one-shot. It made me smile :D

That was pretty funny. And I loved the part where Erza teased Jellal about his fiancée.
Keep up the good work!

hahaha! Loved it. I think u portrayed ultear perfectly. I just cannot wait for Erza to tease Jellal in the manga about his fiancee :P

I've always wondered what Jellal and Erza must've been thinking when they heard about the punishment game, haha.

ohmygod this is adorbs. and not OOC. jesus christ my shipper heart just explODED

O_O Adorable. I LOVE JERZA!

This was reaaally sweet, and it had a couple of cool moments in it that I enjoy.

On a critical note, try to make the first to paragraphs less tense and clumped. There are few sentences in that section, but they contain so much information that it's hard to read. The first couple paragraphs of a story are what make or break it for readers and potential reviewers. In this case, I made it through, but it was difficult. Try making the sentences flow more, and take a more artistic approach rather than trying to get information across. I would have liked to see a description of the streets of Crocus. It's a very beautiful city, but the only descriptive word I saw was 'blossoming,' and that didn't tell me much.

I do like the fact that Ultear and Meredy made an appearance, and they were there to make fun of Jellal. _ It's strange that I enjoy seeing my favorite character in the agony of being embarrassed. I also liked how you added those bits about Jellal being uncomfortable in Mystogan's clothes. I don't think a lot of people think about stuff like that, but it was great that you took the time to. Maybe the people that don't think of that are the one's that forget that he had sweat POURING OFF HIM during his fight with Jura. Eheheh...

Thank you for publishing this! I'm definitely going to look at some of your other fics. (If you have them. I'm assuming you do...)

-Laugh out