I love your story for multiple reason. For starters I love Shizaya. Two, I love twisted romances, I think their the best... I know I'm crazy. And the finally reason is that it reminds me of the Joker and Harley Quinn. Nicely done!

Wow...this story was so sweet! I wanted them to escape together at the end! You were right you should have either made it longer or into chapters. I was so enthralled by this story! X3

Wow! This was really creative and I was really able to visualize what was happening. You did a fantastic job!

o-ohmygod, that was insanely beautiful *Q*

It's insereting

Ooh, I really loved this! It was pretty sad, but still a good read.
(I can't get over how cute the chibi Izaya picture is.)