Why do I even read these things and make myself feel depressed as hell TTwTT

you god damn jerk! I cried so hard! God damn it all. This shit is too emotional for my, I can't handle shit like this!
I'm a mess right now because of all the crying and snot. I blame you for this!
Shit. This is too well written to be so emotional, I get to hung up in the story. poor lu. How could you!?

I cried 100 Liters of Tears. have you seen that Jdrama? it's 12 episodes long, and you end up crying every episode from start to end. all the time.

that's what i felt when i read this story. it's a heartbreaking masterpiece. i wonder what changes are there in their world when Luffy's not there.

Zoro prolly died. Aokay, now i'm even sadder.

all those aside, this is a brilliant piece. thank you so much for sharing. more power to you!
ヽ(；へ；)ノ.‧º·(ฅдฅº·.｡ﾟ( ﾟஇωஇﾟ)ﾟ｡

Don't put yourself down. Yeah it might have been a bit rushed but it was still emotional and I'm crying. I'm just going to go crawl into my blankets and cry myself to sleep, like I did with Divide. (I hadn't come to the Sabo is alive part yet.)

*cries for a thousand years* how dare you! This was so sad! TT_TT Ace was 20 and still on Goa, I hate how brave Luffy was! Stupid rubberman making me cry D: I thought this was really well written actually? But either way, thanks for writing/making me cry at school!

This certainly shows how quickly a terminal illness can derail plans. Also, reminds me a bit of a lot of the pain that goes on in Law's backstory. Of course this also leaves a pretty significant gap in canon, which brings up the question of what changes without Luffy around? Thank you for writing and posting this!

I'm literally crying! This was so damn amazing, I've read some of your stories now and every single one of them are amazing!

Can you imagine the reaction of my co-worker when I suddenly cried? Hahaha this is so good.

THE FEELS hit me sooooooo hard im crying y u do dis to me

is it bad that this made me cry? I couldn't help it even if this was a out of bordisum story this made me cry, and the music i was listening to wasn't helping ether. TTTT

I...I'm not even sure why I'm crying...I mean it was sad, but I was prepared for Luffy to die...I was prepared for hear what he said...and yet I wasn't crying for Luffy...I was crying for Ace...Its so sad...

Gah! I ended up reading the whole thing all over again!
Ahem. Well, I told you I was going to come back here and leave a review. I don't know why you hate this so much. For me it's one of my favourites. It's so sad and awfully sweet and while, yes, it's on the borderline of cheesy, it doesn't actually get there.

It would be interesting to see Sabo meeting Ace and wondering where the heck Luffy was, though.. O.o ANYWAY, I'm sorry I'm like a year late for leaving a review. Better late than never, right? XD

Salt out.

even if the plot was damn cheesy and stuff I loved it . wasn't bad as u made it out to b . I felt almost like crying and I RARELY feel like crying over fanfic deaths . it was pretty good . and I agree The Dvide is Awesome.

This is so saaaaaaaaaaaaad *burst into tears*
I don't think it's bad at all! Even if I judged solely on this fic, I would judge you a wonderful author!
Oh Ace
Oh Luffy
The feeeeeeels ;A;
But it's beautiful
So glad that Ace found family and happiness *sobs*

Oh noooo tears.

I thought you were gonna reveal that he took Luffy's crew too (since he would have set sail around the same time that Luffy initially did)