Reviews for The Rival Lovers
Guest chapter 3 . 2/16
When will you updated it?
Nigger faggot chapter 3 . 3/23/2018
I like the part where The train hit the PPAP guy, Also Anotha chapter would be nice..
Guest chapter 3 . 12/15/2017
Hope you update soon
Guest chapter 2 . 12/15/2017
Love momma dino
Guest chapter 3 . 12/15/2017
What a slut
Guest chapter 2 . 12/15/2017
Keep it up loving it
Guest chapter 1 . 12/15/2017
Nice so far
Minnie Nickie chapter 3 . 5/6/2017
U Should continue
Guest chapter 3 . 4/17/2017
I feel bad for Rupert kinda
A.G.Wicked chapter 3 . 7/7/2016
Hot chapter bro ;)
Anomynous chapter 1 . 5/8/2016
Get on with it... Get it to rudy x momma lemons
VzCarver chapter 2 . 10/26/2015
Please continue this story
dinomonfan chapter 2 . 8/29/2015
i can just imagine trip and lynn sittin in the bushes and lynn be like ive got gossip wait trip are you jackin yourself
Maple11 chapter 2 . 11/29/2014
Please continuie the story. It is amazing!
CLake chapter 2 . 9/25/2014
Good man :)

How will Rudy play a part in his though?
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