ooooo this is exciting... a plan is forming, and jaccks insistence on family... 3

Awesome story, I look forward to possible future chapters

I really like this story concept, and Jack and Pitch's interactions with the other spirits are interesting.

This. Is. Really quite amazing.

Wow this is good. Love it!

Yay, another update! I've been following this story for a while, and I. Love. It. I binge re-read the story today and I'm already eager for the next chapter- though I'm willing to wait because it is well worth it!

I love how Jack and Pitch's relationship keeps evolving and is so indefinable that even Eros is baffled and intrigued by it, enough to join them right after seeing it. Also, I like the dynamic between the whole group in the alliance. Their characters mesh so well together, and I'm already attached to the OCs, even though I normally don't care for stories with a lot of original characters.

In summary, I love this story and how you write the characters, and I'll be eagerly awaiting your next update!

FFB

Omg this was so sweet!

I must admit I had to reread the whole story again because I couldn't remember some parts, but it was well worth the wait!

I love that the trials are apparently designed for lovers/close relationships. I get that these ones were designed specifically for Jack and Pitch, but other people would get trials of a similar nature, right?

And Pitch! I love that he's always ready to ready to snap and push at first, but that it doesn't take him long to choose Jack and agree to his conditions. They still have a way to go, but they already are Relationship Goals TM; or at least, they are going in the right path.

And Pitch's new body sounds awesome! Of course Jack doesn't care much, but I can imagine not everyone is going to be as blasé about it when they go meet the others.

Great chapter! It really warmed my heart! And Jack's background story was brilliant! Thank you very much for posting, I'll be waiting anxiously for the next one!

YEEESSSS YOU HAVE RETURNED!THANK YOU BLESSINGS WITH ANOTHER CHAPTER!

So... no more? You would stop it there? But why...?

Hay there, are you still going to update this? If so ill be wait for a new and amazing chapter and if not, that's okay i know how writing is but if u do update ill be there to read it!

I like your story a unique angle having Pitch enter Jack's brain. I hope you return to completing it soon there are too many abandoned stories out there in fiction land. Also, would like to see all you have planned for Pitch and Jack's relationship you say just friends but maybe there is more.

I am such a geek,this is my third time reading this story in the last four months (seventh time since i found it) and i still laugh at all the funny moments! XP
Might we gwt an update on how the next chapter is coming along?

Amazing!~~

This story is pretty great so far. I love Jack and Pitch's complicated relationship, the Guardian's whole "but Pitch is evil!" schtick and now the complications with Kozmotis. Keep it going.

OH MY GOD!

I can't believe it! This is one of my favourite RotG fic, so I always gt hyped up when it's updated, even if I barely remember what was going on in this last arc but WOW! Pitch and General Pitchiner got separated!? The hell? And Pitch is living in Jack's head now? Oh my god, oh my god, this is great! I can't wait for the next chapter! What will Kozmotis do? Will he make things worse for our team? Will the body Isis builds be enough for Pitch? What kind of body? Are Jack and him going to be okay? Oh my gosh, can't wait!