Plz Update soon

Wait, so with all the TRAINING she's getting from Sasuke, even WITH the training no matter how low it is, how can she STILL get her butt kicked so easily by the bullies instead of using all of Sasuke's training to deal out just as much pain back to the bullies who like to beat her up?

Um... Out of EVERYBODY they are keeping Tsuna's real gender a secret from, WHY are Tsuna and Nana keeping it a secret from Yoshi? Shouldn't YOSHI of all people know what REAL gender his 'brother' is after all these years? When they were growing up there had to have been times when he SAW her real gender like when they were swimming, bathing together (before they got too old for that one), etc.. *lol* Yet he truly believes Tsuna is his 'brother'?

this beautiful -although I don't like yoshi

Your story is confusing and disorganized. The change of scenes is so abrupt it's giving me a whiplash.
I give up. Sorry, I can't keep reading something so badly written and messy.

You need a beta reader ASAP! I feel a bit embarrassed for you. There are lots of grammar errors in this story. You should proofread before posting.

Your grammar sucks! You should rewrite the whole story

Lots of grammar errors and misspellings in this chapter

Update! I was skipping some of the page , looking for sasuke meeting them :(

Tsuna should have flat out REFUSED to the captains demand. Why the hell should SHE have to pay for YOSHI'S cowardice just because some high school jock captain said so just because shes Yoshis older sibling? Tell mr jock strap where he can SHOVE his demands because it has NOTHING to do with HER, and to keep his beef solely to Yoshi because she WON'T be cleaning up HIS messes every time HE pissed off people SHE didn't piss off. Why should SHE get beaten black and blue (as far as everyone who comes to watch the match will think will happen to her) just because Yoshi pissed off the wrong people and ran out on a fight?

Please update 's really good.

NOOOO~ Cliff hanger ! I hope you continue this is amazing

Awesome

Good

I really can't wait to find out what everyone thinks of Sasuke!