Thanks for writing excellent story.

Well I was reading it with pleasure, but it wasn't perfect for me.
I must praised you for giving this story the plot, even if at the end it wasn't so important anymore.
You quite well wrote Okita, he got really cool lines and was appropriately jealous and possessive but both he and Kagura were so shallow. I know it meant to be funny and light romantic story but Okita is rather dark character and I'm sure Kagura is not so tsundere, she should be more bold and dominant, while she was acting like a stupid teenager most the time.
Your sense of humour is really good just like yours skill to wrote in Gintama style I really like references toward fandom, but most of your gags are repeatable(eg. Toshi being mother) and characters often talk to much about nothing or just screaming and arguing and it becomes annoying and tiresome.
But in conclusion as a stupid and light story to cheer up it was good.

yey!
im gonna read those okikagu stories...it seems so interesting!

i loved so much this fic!
okikagu is the best!
Everything was so great! :}

I... I LOVE THIS! w
It was really like a Gintama arc, well of course a more shojo one but now you actually made me want this arc to be the end of Gintama :D :D
OkiKagu really is the best :D *-* However I did not expect their relationship to... progress THIS fast xD 2 days straight? Now that's... really impressive Sougo XD
And I never ever thought about a Kamui x Nobume pairring but it sounds quite good, I just imagine them together with their children killing everyone like one big happy family XD
So all in all I'm glad I came across your story as I was starting to lose hope that I could find a good fanfic I haven't read yet. :P

jajaja i love the part in which okita and kagura are fighting against the white police! jajaja
and he said he wil protect her!
sougo was the only one who remembered about her!
jajaja kamui! talking alone and smiling jajaj poor abuto, jajaa
and they kised! *w*
what a beautiful story.. thanks!
happy new year XD

great story and cute ending, except for the mention of rape. It's a very harmful messenge, not cool. But overall I love this fic to bits. Nice mixture of humour and romance the dadtaki is adorable, and very spot-on. Jealous Sou-chan is too precious. And my dearling Kagura is too perfect.

ice but there ate some mistakes

So…. Who was exactly behind the memory loss? Was it kiheitai (not kihietai, ok?) or that amanto consul and harusame? And if gintoki can regain his memory due to the shock seeing kagura kissing sougo, how did everybody got their memories back? And is the final part hinting kamui x nobume? Btw, it's kaientai, not kahietai.

This is the first ever Gintama fanfic I've ever read, and I LOVE IT.
The plot was interesting, and those OkiKagu moments released my inner fangirl and made me squeal like a bitch, though I kinda feel bad for Shinpachi, Otae-chan, and the others for not having more screentime. Oh well, hope they'll get what they want in the sequel, which I'll be reading next!
That was great, definitely worth sacrificing my precious sleep for (I read this in the middle of the night, waaay past my bedtime), and you have definitely become one of my favourite authors :D

the story you made is really awesome... _ I hope you make the sequel that would be nice... hahaha XD

0o0 a sex scene ! ? That was unexpected when nipple was mentioned . I was like ok...
Yosuga no sora moment ( I didn't know it was a hentai ) anywayssss I liked your fix. U got skills

You know, I am a big fan of SougoxKaguraxKamui, even though Kagura and Kamui are siblings. I hope you make another story about them. *squeal* And I like your story! I want a jealous Okita Sougo! Especially if the reason is Kamui and Kagura :'

nice!

happy unbirthday to you in favor of this fanfic hoping that the continuation will be just as well