Reviews for Grey in the Dark
Librasmile chapter 2 . 4/8/2017
I cannot find words to tell you how much I LOVE this - so rich in texture and feeling and a sense of history, so rooted in geographical place and culture. THANK YOU for writing so beautifully and fully.
Guest chapter 2 . 3/25/2016
Thank you! You really bring the characters ( your originals as well as your version of jkr's) to life. It works and is credible. So again: thank you for sharing
Guest chapter 2 . 10/2/2014
"Reed root and kneazle whisker"

Wow!
Myrrat-Sade chapter 1 . 5/12/2014
Another well-written piece, but over all too fast. I'm sincerely hoping you'll continue it.
hwyla chapter 1 . 2/13/2014
Out of curiosity - where exactly do you think Spinners End is located? It appears in this story that Sev and Eileen have walked to Sherwood, but your newest chapter in 'Valley' has Sev meet his mother in Heald Wood for the Bluebells, which as best as I can figure by Mapquest is near Burnley. Bowland, which you mention here, seems to be in Scotland? Unless, of course the bluebell wood in the Bowland is made up? Either way it can still be north of Spinners End with Sherwood in the south. But it still seems as if you have them walking over 20 miles. Therefore, I'm wondering whether you had a specific place in mind or if I am putting too much 'reality' in to it all?
Karakehribar chapter 1 . 10/25/2013
Wow! Just found your stories from a link on a Favorites list - love the nuances & how the characters are portrayed. This wand story is excellent!
Guest chapter 1 . 9/26/2013
Wow, that was... One of the best short stories I've ever read, fanfic or no. I don't even like short stories, tell you the truth.
I could feel the entire world right there, clear as a bell. Thank you; it might be painful for you as a writer, but I'll tell you that writers like you are what make people scour fanfiction... On my mobile or I'd follow/fav you.
Ebony Starstorm chapter 2 . 9/21/2013
You'd think they'd wait, know they're actually guilty...
Guest chapter 2 . 5/13/2013
lovely story :)
excessivelyperky chapter 2 . 3/19/2013
Please continue this story. I can't brew you anything, though, but the local brewery here makes a fine dark ale (Buttcrack Brown. Really. But it tastes great).
excessivelyperky chapter 1 . 3/19/2013
Wow. This is an amazing story about wands so far, and about Sev's life when he was younger.
Catlady1960 chapter 2 . 3/16/2013
I like this one alot. You could even continue it to a novella.
RB chapter 2 . 2/10/2013
A Northern wandmaker and untraceable wands! I just loved your fic. Yorkshire!Snape is so much more fun than London!Snape...