This story is absolutely amazing!

... Seriously? You STILL don't know why he kissed you, Raven? Jesus Christ, that's not dense. That's just plain stupid. (Not really a criticism, just venting)

Also, side note, ANOTHER alternate reality OC? Really? Do these OCs have purpose or are they deus ex machima? I mean, the guys were interesting because they weren't just another version of Raven, but seriously, as constructive criticism, tone back the OCs. I almost skip them over the monster paragraphs that involve them now because they serve no real purpose to the plot. Monster-of-the-week characters have more dimensions.

Other than that, no complaints. This fic is one of the more awesome and developed RikuxOC stories on fanfiction.

cool story

Thanks for updating!

YES FINALLY! I love this story, have been reading for a while and oh boy I was waiting for this SO MUCH. Can't wait for the next chapter!

No! Raven! I think my favorite part of this chapter was when she figured out that Riku's heart was in the guardian and she tried to save him. I've always imagined that Riku could see what was happening outside of him. If he can, I don't think he'd be too happy about what Ansem is doing to Raven. Excited to see what happens next. Keep up the good work. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Interesting. I'm really wondering what's going to happen. My favorite part was when Riku stopped Ansem. I love that part in the game too. Keep up the good work. Can't wait for the next chapter.

I finally found time to read this. I really liked the fight between Rex and Raven. I also liked when Raven turned into a dragon. For this chapter, I think my favorite part was Raven getting closer to Rex and Al. I'm excited to see what happens when Riku comes out to save Kairi. Keep up the good work. Can't wait for the next chapter.

AWESOME! :D I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH!
I'M SO HYPED!
Even though there are a few grammar errors in here, I enjoyed it so much! You're such a talented writer! :D
Can't wait for what you have in store. ;) Raven better kick Ansem's butt.

I really liked this chapter. Raven and Mori's friendship is awesome. That would probably be my favorite part of this chapter. Keep up the good work. Can't wait for the next chapter.

I love this chapter too! :D :D :D
But I'm ready for Riku-Ansem. Raven is gonna have to fight him, doesn't she? I know he's what is on the other side of the door. xD ALL THE HYPE!

Raven, that's a bad idea. This is beginning to get intense. Things seem to be spiraling out of control, though I know it will probably turn out okay in the end. My favorite part of both of these chapters was meeting and getting to know More. She seems like a very interesting character. Keep up the good work. Can't wait for the next chapter.

This chapter is bae

Aww, the upcoming feels :(
but nice chapter again

I really liked this chapter. I'm excited about the fight. I'm really curious to see what happens next. My favorite part of this chapter was Aleri nearly getting knocked out when Raven made him fall. I thought that was funny, though I did worry for him a little. Keep up the good work. Can't wait for the next chapter.