Reviews for Out of Africa
sally rally chapter 12 . 7/5/2019
Very, very nice interesting story. Enjoyed it very much.
KateB chapter 12 . 4/23/2017
Splendid stuff. Impeccable characterization and dialogue, with a perfect blending of angst and humor. I'm always amazed that the best fanfic writers honor these irresistible women so much more profoundly than the series' writers did. The show had every necessary ingredient - compelling characters and a crack cast - except for a writing team that never ventured beyond mediocrity.
crime fictiction chapter 12 . 6/11/2016
wow wat a story
Carla chapter 6 . 2/25/2016
My God, this is SO GOOD! Seriously, I cannot get over the fact how good this is. I'm reading fanfiction and it's so extremely well written- I'm amazed. You're amazing! It's a complex, extremely well thought-out storyline, perfect characterization, the jokes, the mystery - alright, I'll stop gushing now. You're probably not reading this anymore anyways. But in case you are- THANK YOU for this fantastic story.
Shaycast chapter 12 . 2/7/2016
Awesome story! :)
luckypenguinbuddy chapter 12 . 11/30/2015
It's been a while since I've read this and it was just as good and touching as it was the first time. So worth revisiting this story. I love protective Jane so much. Thank you for sharing this gem with us.
SavedByTheFic chapter 12 . 11/5/2015
Taking someone's croissant for purposes of blackmail is actually evil and WILL require penance.

When I read "antagonizingly tiny bite" i squee, because you are a wonderful writer.
If you ever see me refer to a "linguistic make-out session" that's the kind of thing I'm thinking of, nothing smutty. I may not ever master this language, but I do love it and I do love people who use it for mischief.

If the brilliant best friend is the furry one, hug him and tell him that you keep impressing people with your writing. If not, hug them etc anyway. People need to know you have a fanbase.

Thank you for writing and being brilliant.
SavedByTheFic chapter 11 . 11/5/2015
Ah, I was wrong. I was thinking "airstrike", but I love how Jane simply accepts credit for the action instead of deflecting.
And Angela is dead wrong as usual. I don't think Maura could do better.

It's also interesting that Dean comes across as mostly human instead of as a self-serving annoybot. For me, that's a fresh take.
SavedByTheFic chapter 10 . 11/5/2015
The priest's reaction - holy Mary etc - is priceless and I recognize it. There's a story in there, I promise, but we'll take it in PM some day.

Assault with a deadly feline? You actually went there? :-) *shakes head*
And I know what Jane is about to do, and I love her determination.
Gestir chapter 3 . 11/3/2015
Hey there, don't be mean to Footie. It DOES make sense (if you're into violence).
The paragraph beginning "In that, Maura Isles was completely and utterly wrong" is one of those things that make me love your writing.
"Korsak was trying to retrieve his tie now from Rockford's grasp and steadily losing ground." I _really_ love your way with words! And I love the idea of a cat flossing. :-)
I'm enjoying this story, but I'm more than a little bit anxious about what Maura has been through.
SavedByTheFic chapter 9 . 11/5/2015
"Disbelief, hatred, shock, blackmail, surrender". I love your mind. :-)
And I like how Jane orders Maura off to brush her teeth. Almost like she's planning some heavy-duty cuddling for the night. OK, maybe I read stuff into it...

I love the sober considering of grandchildren. I love ALL your writing. Please never quit.
SavedByTheFic chapter 8 . 11/5/2015
Jesus, you had me worried there. I figured you would have warned me if there was a rape in-story against one of the major characters, but damn... I've been fretting for eight chapters.
*phew*
As I always say: never apologiese for cliffies. Cliffhangers are one thing, the rape factor was a different kind of stress altogether.
MarCor3 chapter 12 . 8/11/2015
Find this story in the Community section and was beautifully done!
Not bad at all for one R&I's story! *to friendship at its best*
Baccan chapter 12 . 8/11/2015
Thank you for sharing this, I particularly liked the little humorous tidbits throughout :)
El chapter 12 . 5/3/2015
This is a wonderful story! The deep, protective bond of friendship is a beautiful thing and you portrayed it so very well in this tale. I'm so glad that I dug through some archives to find this gem! Sorry to see you don't write Rizzles anymore, but I'm thankful you posted this one. If you ever do find the muse to write them again, I'll be in line to read. Thank you & hope you're doing well.
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