This fanfic was very cute. I also liked your depiction of Snape.

Many of the chapters seemed to cut off abruptly. Your drabble format made the pacing very fast and it felt a bit rushed. In my opinion, I believe that this story would have been better if it was not in drabble format, but it does have its charm. You write well.

You could have developed the characters more and develop Snape and Elaine's relationship a bit more as well. I believe that would have been easier to do if it wasn't a drabble.

This was an okay fanfic overall. Keep up the good work!

Hi,
I really really enjoyed reading this story. It's very cool and great. You did very well with it.
I would have equally enjoyed it if the story was fully written out and not just in drabbles, but the drabbles also fit the character of the story very well. But I find it great that the story is still quite close to a fully written out story in the way that you covered most events and didn't truly leave out much of the action. That makes it much easier to follow the storyline.
Although, I have a question, what is it with the word(s) and number at the end of each chapter?

Very nice ! I read it in one go, it was lovely :) I like this format very much.

I'm certain I comment the same thing on all your fanfics, you must be sick of my username. But this is so beautifully and delicately written. I've truly enjoyed reading this over the last few days. The drabble style makes each chapter a perfect jewel. Characterisation is wonderful. I've had fun guessing which word in each chapter was the inspiration. A perfect story

This was a gentle and very mature version of post war life for Snape. Quite lovely.

Beautiful!

This is adorable!

This was lovely, Thanks for posting :)

I'm sorry but this is fairly rubbish mate. You could've had maybe 20 pretty decent sized chapters for this story and it would've been mint. But instead you did 100 chapters that are all like 3 sentences long. It's unbelievably confusing, it doesn't flow very well and it really isn't too good.

More than disappointed ngl

Exquisite.

This whole story was very lovely, simple, but lovely. You did quite a good job in your writing and I can see the skill you used in getting the precise word count for each chapter. I enjoyed reading it, thank you :)

Aww, so sweet. Thank you for the lovely chapter :3

Aww :) So glad it didn't last longer than a few chapters

My heart would have plummeted after hearing that. Poor Elaine :(

At least Elaine is taking everything quite well. My curious mind would be tossing over everything that was said over and over in my head trying to figure out what they're talking about. Awesome stuff :)