A fascinatingly good story. I can only hope you continue it one day.

The final of chapter, heaven's feel opening soung

estado leyendo fanfics de este tipo que toman shinji como personaje protagónico y lo renuevan para convertirlo en un personaje casi OC, y debo decir que lo que has hecho aquí me ha fascinado,es una lástima que dejaras de actualizar esta historia su potencial como has dicho es grande y este es un campo sin explotar aún después de tiempo de haber sido realizado este fanfic casi ningún autor se ha tomado la molestia de realizar este tipo de historias que toman a este personaje para hacer el protagonista
Pero en fin lo único que me queda es seguir leyendo esto para ver de qué manera "terminó", y quitarme la duda de encima XD

I liked your choice and usage of Lu Bu here. It makes sense considering your Shinji s affinities with China. And he is just strong enough that we really do not know what gonna happen.

Would like to complement this story again.
This paper mage craft you created for Shinji is awesome. It’s versatile and interesting while keeping that fate charm. - speaking of which you crafted a grate action secene with these 2. Felt a lot of kiritsugo vs kayneth.
Other than that I just really like learning seeing your shinji beeing awesome and likable and enjoying the subconscious disconnect of liking so much a character with the same face and name than a guy who is the anime symbol of unlikable

Liking this fic.
Is great when some one can make and AU where things go better for the suffering characters while still making it feel loyal to the original.
Being a good or bad person is just a choice- to see shinji deciding to fins strength in forming a bond with Sakura and value in himself in the hole off a protector - instead off using her as a stress relief and developing a superiority complex - os pretty great.
He still is shinji- but a shinji who made better choices still in line with his personality type.
And now Sakura is not alone what is great

Spent the past couple of days reading this and I quite enjoy it
It makes me sad that it was last updated years ago on a cliffhanger
But it was fun while it lasted

Wonderful story. It's a shame it'll likely never be completed. And it left off on such a cliffhanger too.

I really want to see more of this. Especially Shirou. I can't wait to see him get his UBW actualized. And for him to start getting better at tracing. Hopefully you have him have a confrontation with Archer which will speed up the process.
Anyways, keep up the great work!

I'm so glad I found this. This is a great work.

what happen next?
I reallly like this story..
For me.. It not entirely Shinji fault he become like the canon..
If only he not born in that family.. I think he would be a good guy

I read through this again. And even though it breaks or at least bends almost every rule in the nasuverse I think its a pity it wasn't finished. It was a good story

waiting for update

I love it so far. I can't wait for you to get back to this so I can read the conclusion.

This story is nothing short of amazing. A Shinji Matou that is actually LIKEABLE... Nice work there. Can't wait to see more of this incredible tale.