this is such a good story and it ended on a major cliff hanger

I like how you added Lorelei in the story

Given that this is the kaleid-verse shouldn't there be no fuyuki fire or something?

Person below zelretch is that powerful given that the jewel sword has prana coming from infinite parallel dimensions.

I understand this is fanfic and it discontinued.

But pretty sure zelretch isn't that powerful.

Yo

This is by far the best Primsa story I have the honor of reading. Shirou feels like the more experienced Shirou and every other character is so full of life and amazing. There's certainly some adorable sisterly rivalry between Illya and Miyu [considering Miyu's backstory].

Shirou's legendary E luck on girls is still funny. Irisviel is the funniest Mother ever. And love how bigger you're making things and it's only five chapters.

Please update.

just finished this wondered who wrote it and lo and behold the author of one of the best oregairu fics out there, I was shocked , especially so when i realised that i did not fav and follow you already,
if you ever decide to pick this srory back up i am sure a lot of people would be elated!(myself included great work on this one)

I wish this wasn't dead.

I love this story. Love your take on Shirou. The relationship between Maiya, Irisviel and Kiritsugu is hilarious. Dearly hope you take up this story again

Thanks for the chapters _.

Well, that was interesting! I haven't seen Prisma Illya except for a few scenes, so I don't know how much of the routine things in this story, like Irisviel v. Maiya or Shirou's propensity for harem comedy situations, are true to the show, but I'll assume they are because otherwise I couldn't stand them. Lorelei having a crush on Shirou because of teenage hormones and the suspension bridge effect was funny. I don't believe Kirei would get angry over someone being in an inappropriate position with Caren, but using the connection for a joke was clever. As for grammar: among other things, you have some trouble with pronouns; i.e., using "myself" where you should use "I". It was especially noticeable in Chapter 4.

Damn! This Emiya Shirou is all about the badassery!

It's a shame that this was abandoned, as most of your other stories seem to be as well. I can only hope that you may one day come back and work on them again, though I know the odds are unlikely. Thanks for writing this.

Nice chapter but did you drop this story?