URGH I HATE HOW YOU PROBABLY WILL NEVER UPDATE THIS, BUT I LOVE THIS.

because you stopped and a very good story

Please continue...

This story is so intense and suspenseful! It makes me want to continue reading it! Update soon :)

I think this story is really interesting, it had a very mysterious plot. Though through the end of the chapter it began to be a little bit rushed like how the women calmed down immediately. she should have been slowly calming down. Also the relationship begins so quickly. overall I think this is a job well done.
Can't wait for the next chapter.

Update pleeeeaaaasssssee

Okay now, this is actually kind of good. Never thought Bakugan would have stuff like this.
Maybe you should change the fandom to something more... I dunno 'less childish'.
I mean, Fairy Tail for instance, if you turned this into JerZa I betcha it'll sell like hot cakes! (or something)

Update faster plz? This is getting real interesting!

Abuse, abuse, & abuse. What's the point of life if it's going to be painful? Stupid girls & dad. At least have Alice threaten all guys that ask her out that she'll kill them. Soon to die yet not allowed to kill himself. What kind of death row & suicide what is that?! I prefer the harp, really. Prove your point right, Alice! Don't be responsible for a person who's not responsible for you. Update soon!

When will you update your profile?

I like it! Can't wait to see how their love develops! Update soon!

OMG this is so awesome!
Granted, it's a bit depresing. But it makes me wonder what happened next!

The plot is amazing! This story is going to be great! Update Soon!

Me likie :D plz update soon

Wow just wow this story is so good!amazing! Cant wait to read more update real soon!:-D