Reviews for The Return of the King and the Fall of the Steward |
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nerdwarf chapter 15 . 7/13/2017 Very well written and good plot staying true to the characters! Thank you. |
ShareneM chapter 15 . 11/25/2016 The comments in between my other ones are all mine, I just forgot to write my name! I'm sorry to say that the ending was not really to my satisfaction... It was abrupt and it felt like something was going to happen next, there was no finality as there should be at a suitable ending, despite this small dilemma, the whole story was truly an amazing masterpiece! Everything was perfect and detailed. Thank you. Shar |
Guest chapter 14 . 11/25/2016 "That is the King I follow." My favourite line! This chapter have me chills! It's breathtaking. I was so tense. Life and death, it would have been cool if u included an analogy. Good on Halbarad! Thank goodness Aragorn saves him, I never thought he would save him like that, that fate would be worse than death for Denethor! I loved the humour at the start also I love the relationship between Aragorn, Elohir and Elladin! I loved the birth of Eldarion. Thanks |
Shar chapter 13 . 11/25/2016 'Sigh' if only people of high authority today were like Aragorn... He was willing, pleading even to let Denethor live, his pride was his downfall. I'm glad that Ternyo and his friend got a fair punishment. Thanks! |
ShareneM chapter 12 . 11/25/2016 I had a hunch that the Dunedian were spies for Aragorn! This was an amazing chapter, I too feel for Faramir and Boromir. Thanks |
ShareneM chapter 11 . 11/25/2016 Denethor is such a trickster, liar and a deceiver! My heart aches for Boromir, having to arrest his own father and realising his folly. Poor man. Thanks |
ShareneM chapter 10 . 11/25/2016 This doesn't disappoint. Aragorn and Arwens characters were beautiful, as expected. I wonder how they will find out the betrayal of Denthor, they already suspect him. They just need proof. Thanks |
ShareneM chapter 9 . 11/25/2016 One of the best chapters so far! |
Shar chapter 8 . 11/25/2016 Were the Knights a ploy from Aragorn or are are they really traitors? I suppose I'll have to find out! Thanks for another riveting chapter |
Shar chapter 7 . 11/24/2016 Who assassinated Herdin? Well thought-out chapter! Thanks! |
ShareneM chapter 6 . 11/24/2016 Oooh! The plot thickens... |
Guest chapter 5 . 11/24/2016 I agree wholeheartedly with Aragorns decision |
ShareneM chapter 5 . 11/24/2016 Oh my goodness! The tension in this chapter was palpable. The characters are amazing as always, their characteristics, mood and tone are perfect! Aragorns worry and then his cold fury was so him! I don't know any other way to put it, this is amazing! |
Guest chapter 4 . 11/24/2016 That was an epic chapter! I liked the father-son relationship between Aragon and Elrond. Beautiful! Im really enjoying the devious plot and am literally on the edge of my seat! Thanks for the time and effort! |
ShareneM chapter 3 . 11/24/2016 I really hope they don't kill Arwen, she's one of my favourite characters. I hope they don't kill the heir either. Aragon won't die, he's the main character! I pity Ternyo, that's a hard decision, traitor! Thanks for this! P.S. I like Aragorns and Arwens wedding! |