This was the sweetest and some what the grossest story I've ever read. But nonetheless,I liked it anyway.

Aaaahh, adoreeeeei! Continue com histórias sobre Jalex!

Interesting, a bit short, but nice.

This was good

I really like the story.

Pros and Cons

Pros
1. I like the main idea of the story. It was hilarious and really sweet.
2. You successfully did the Dual POV. Not everyone can do it right
3.I liked how they both liked each other equally.
4. I liked how Teresa reacted when she learned her kids were in love. It felt so naturally.
5. I liked how calm Jerry was and how her acted like it was no big deal

Cons
1. I wish that this was a multi - chapter story
2. I wish that there was a sequel
3. I wish you would make more Jalex stories.

loved it!

Aww, this is so cute. Even though I support Alex/Mason and Justin/Juliet, I thought that this was really cute, and it made me like Jalex! I think you should write a squeal to this story! I love it!