A hellva story, I must say. It was awesome. Glad I waited to read the series. Onwards to the sequel.

Loved it sm!

"Brax never hugged me"
Mesobs*

...I relate, Doctor. *hugs*

I love you but I don't think I'm going to stop crying anytime soon.

Still crying.
Why did you do this?

I'm
Just
Hm
Yeah I still hate you.

I'm crying

I was right in the fact that I was wrong.

And you have just broken my singular heart; even as it beat in my chest. Now my blood rushes cold through my veins and freezes in my throat, my head, before warm, ices over, a frost of pain lining my thoughts. Meine Herz rütteln, und danach stoppt vollständig. Ich wunsch das Ich könnte nimmer liebe weider. Mein Blut geißt aus auf zu den Silber-Sieb. Ich weinen, leise.

Haha um yeah not sure where that came from...

*awkward cough*

Okay anyway we are officially in a love -hate relationship, 'kay? I love this chapter (see above) but I hate it a lot more than I love it. That is both good and bad.

Have a nice day. *sinister smile*

OHMYGOSH I THINK I JUST REALIZED SOMETHING but I'm not going to say it in case I'm wrong

I'm screaming it's so beautiful please never ever ever stop writing

I was laughing so hard in this chapter, oh my gosh. This was also basically perfect because thanks to Jack, i now know how to conduct myself in a fistfight!

this was an awww... chapter it was awesome

What is the sequel going to be called?

PLEASE MAKE SEQUALS!