I really love this story. You made zack's comeback very realistic.
Please continue with this story.
Cheers
Maya

The brothels and crossdressing line made me laugh too!

Cloud crying... I... My heart... I can't... Waaaaaaaaaa...
I really felt like crying too

Gosh I wanna cry... Poor Zack is so lonely...

I know there's probably no hope but I so wish you would keep writing this. It's magnificent and I deeply enjoy the character complexity.

I have absolutely fallen in love with this story! It's wonderful. I hope one day you come back and update. I've favorited it and followed it )

Please continue this story! Not a whole lot of good Cloud/Zack stories that are also long. Really want to see how Cloud reacts to Zack getting jealous. And maybe see Cloud get roped into racing and showing off.

I'm devastated you haven't updated this story since 2015, it's so good!

I'm one of those people who're very late to the party apparently. If I'd known this story was in existence longer than the past two days, then I would've been following it religiously since the beginning.

It's only five chapters, but it's five long and plentifully enjoyable chapters. I couldn't help but feel my heart squeeze in pain when Zack or Cloud were showing distress at the situations thrown at them, and I'm most definitely interested in seeing how in knowing what's going on with Angeal showing back up on this upper side of Gaia.

I don't know that you're going to continue it, but if you do, please know that I'll be waiting with baited breath for the next chapter.

Upppdaattteee, yaaaayyyyyy~!

Very interesting. Liking the slow build up. Really matches the tone and characters' internal dilemmas.

I love this, you are writing something else.

Oh no, Zack is jealous! Will Cloud know what's going on? I feel like he might notice something is off, but maybe he's never seen this side of Zack before; he's usually so confident, and in the past Cloud wasn't as popular as he is now, so Zack might not be used to competition (or at least, what Zack perceives as competition). Cloud was lucky in the last chapter, because Zack instantly knew what was going on with the whole Cissnei situation and was able to reassure him. In fact, I really feel like Zack has been reassuring Cloud every step of the way, letting him know he's gonna stick by Cloud's side and wait for him, etc.; which is awesome, but at the same time he really hasn't been getting the same kind of reassurance from Cloud. Maybe that's why Zack is feeling a little insecure and left out right now? Anyway, I'm really interested in seeing what kind of confrontation these two are gonna have! I hope they don't get in a big fight :(

Oh, and you brought Angeal back, yay! I'm really curious to see where this whole thing with the Lifestream is going...Also, did you imply Angeal x Tifa at the beginning of this chapter? Hehehe I'm excited to see where all this is headed~

Yes do continue please

YESSS! I'm so freakin happy this updated! I actually fell off laughing when I read that particular line from Zack. Your story is interesting, has twists and turns I'm unable to predict, and all around enjoyable. I can't wait to see what happens next!