omg so i’ve read this three times and every time i come back it never disappoints! it’s totally unique and so dramatic and technical and deadass the only story that can compete w/ aurorawest’s series and it’s just SO GOOD. i love it i love it alot and every time i see the cliffie it kills me and i realllly hope u update in the future bc it is just INCREDIBLE! great work! 3 333 33333

I love your story!

having recently watched Ralph wrecks the internet I've been looking for good fanfiction and yours so far has taken the cake!

I've never seen Surge be a main character and I love it, I love seeing his personality you created and his thoughts, I especially love the story you created, never a dull moment and smooth to read. I especially like seeing Surge be a badass XD very cool.

I hope you get back to this one some time, I'd love to see more of him and you.

All I want for Christmas is for you to update this wonderful thing.

Four years later, and this still feels like a natural extension of what you've already written. Well done.

Good to have you back, Windsett.

I'm sorry for the crude review I posted earlier. It's not exactly the review I wanted to post on a great story.
Usually, I wouldn't care if a great story is continued or not. Sure, I'd be a bit disappointed, but I would deal with it. However, you gave clear indication that you are, in fact, going to continue this story someday. So, when are you going to update? It's really cruel to leave us on a cliffhanger like that. It's a great cliffhanger, and it's just begging for a sequel. So, please? This story really intrigues me and captures my attention. I think that this, out of all Fanfics out there, has forced me to reread it the most.
So, I beg of you, please update this story. It's too good to be left unfinished.
If you want me, I'll be reading your other stories.

I feel like I know the Surge Protector now; and hate him as much as the characters do. I'm glad he's dead. Turbo should be a vast improvement. Too bad about Vanellope though. It's unlikely he'll want to save her. Oh wait, she died an hour ago.

Fairly certain that Vanellope died twenty minutes ago. Calhoun's yelling at Surge alone took up four of the two and a half minutes she had left.

I kinda hope you update soon, I really love this story.

Is the story over? Did they loose? Did you give up on this? Did you loose inspiration? Did you die? Why hasn't this story continued? I love this story and I want to know if they save everyone, including Vanellope! I want to know if the Surge Protector dead, or if Turbo IS truly evil! I'm kind of hoping it's a virus that made him evil or if given a choice he could help others instead of taking everything away from them. I don't know, I just like redeemed villains type of story. But I LOVE this one! And now I'm ranting because I want to see this finished... sorry. PLEASE tell me your alive, at least.

Plz continue

ayyyyy
the cliffie

It's 1:01 AM as I look at the clock. Late, really late considering when I'm going to be waking up at... But when you find a FIC like this one, well... I couldn't just leave it. Your work is quality, and lengthy. Both things I like to see in a Fanfic. But to the point that you've forced me to stay up and read it into the morning. *shake of the head* Well your just-just something, I'm blanking on the word right now, its too early.
Good news: your story is great, the characters and inner monologues/internal reasoning is great. Spot-On.

Bad news: It seems that, that Grumpy-Old-Snake took those pictures down. Shame on it.

P.S. That cliffhanger, truly you dabble in the most despicable of arts to reach such a high level of cliff-hanging.

P.P.S. Have a good morning.

Well, let's give this fic the old rundown.

So far:

Plot:

Nailbiting suspense is the story's forte so far, and I'm not complaining. Turbo coming back is an overdone premise, but I'm hoping you can do something good with it. At any rate, your idea of *how* he might come back is different from others I've seen, so credit where credit is due.

Characterization:

For the Surge Protector, A from beginning to as far as you've gotten. Vanellope is pretty well done, so far as her actual personality has been featured. We haven't seen Sour Bill yet, but the few hints you've dropped about him offer an intriguing direction. Ralph is pretty good overall. Calhoun is generally splendid, though unlike some writers around here, I don't see her using actual profanity. The entire point of her bizarre speech patterns in the film was that she would say almost anything in order to avoid actual profanity; that was the entire joke. So I object on the grounds of it being out of character for her.

The weak link on the characterization front is Taffyta- not because the characterization you've given her here is bad on its own terms, but because, as I've already noted, every hint the film gives about where she is in life after Turbo's defeat and her game's reset points towards her *not* doing what you've had her do here. So far, you haven't offered sufficient explanation as to the utterly drastic change of direction you've had her character undergo. Merely being favored, encouraged, etc. by King Candy doesn't totally cut it for me; I need to know more. I need to see her own mindset. I will give you a fair chance to explore what's going on with her more deeply before I cast final judgement but if, when the story ends, I'm still not convinced, I will be forced to consider this a flaw in the story.

Prose:

There's nothing flashy about your prose here; it's largely functional. On the other hand, that may be fridge brilliance, given that functionality is a major element of the storyline.

You do need to give these chapters one more editing session, as some grammatical errors have escaped your attention previously. Overall, though, it looks pretty good to me.

Did I Enjoy the Story?

So far as it has gone, yes I have. I have my qualms, which I have already elucidated, but these fifteen chapters are among the best pieces of work I've seen come out of you- almost up there with the beautiful piece that is "Perfectly Broken". I will follow this story, in the hopes that you can address my concerns, and give this plot the strong finish it deserves.

Very nice internal monologue here.

Taffyta as written here is out of character for the Taffyta in the film. I hope more of an explanation is forthcoming, because I just can't connect the film's Taffyta with this one- even allowing for the fan theory of her being favored to an extent by King Candy. But setting that aside, your Taffyta is nevertheless, on her own terms, a well written character. It appears you've put a lot of thought into her dialogue, attitudes, etc., which is something I can appreciate.