it was perfect *.*

Amazing. Please do part 2

I really like this pairing I don't know why I just do, so I was really cautious coming into this fic especially because it's Yuri and for some reason majority of the time the Yuri is unrealistic and kinda irritating. However yours is far from it, I'm thankful to find an author who at least knows that someone can be satisfied just by bringing pleasure to someone else and that two girls getting smutty doesn't instantly mean scissoring. For that I am thankful and I thoroughly enjoyed this fic. :3

Natsu: HEY LUC- *is at the window and see Lucy and Levy, nose bleeds and goes to get a iron dragon slayer)

Ze Iron Dragon Slayer (I don't know how to spell his name.) : WHAT. *Sees Lucy and Levy nose bleeds and passes out*

Natsu : *passes out as well*

Very well done! I wish there were more Lucy x Levy lemons. Nice job, Sir!

You should totally write more for this couple

That was awesome

I really liked this it was good

I liked the buildup but when it comes to the actual scene you could add a bit more body functions throbbing, tightening etc.. but you did really good for your first time :) A tip that a friend gave me was if writing in third is difficult try writing in first

Very hot. Only problem really is that there were a few words used incorrectly. Your imagery is excellent. You may want to try and include more senses. Lots of visual descriptions and somatosense but maybe one use of sound and no taste or olfactory. The last two are the most powerful in making memories and thus describing one well makes you story more memorable.

pretty good

It's nice too see more yuri lemons for this couple :)