Great story love the good one like this.

Fun story, well-written but a little rushed.

Security clearances don't actually require the agent(s) involved know anything about the project the key individual is working on. In fact, they almost certainly don't.

I really like this story I'm on my 4th re-read.

I was just curious because I hadn't timed myself field stripping a pistol, but I just tried two different popular brands, and without any speed practice (and I haven't taken these apart as recently as I really should even for maintenance) it took me 10 seconds to clear and take them apart, that's including removing the barrel.

Doesn't affect my love for this story, social distancing has me looking for issues in fics I can test to avert deeper insanity.

A short but pleasing tale. I enjoyed reading it and appreciate your sharing it with the rest of us.
Good flow from the start. A nice change of pace.

So, I mentioned the error of Sam's rank being wrong... as I said, that's pretty minor.
There is one very major plot hole here tho... just when did Harry download a repository? I don't remember seeing any of that at all.

Minor mistake. Sam was a Captain from the very first episode.

Thank you for writing this story I quite enjoyed it very much and I hope you will keep up the great work.

Lovely! :)

Nice and interesting Story. The End was a bit too fast.

Ähm if the 3 Ascend they wont need any balls ond Harry.

Esta muy bueno la historia como le fue a harry con sam y hermione en el comando stargate mas el nuevo edén mas los cambios en la tecnología que paso con los gould y que no pusiste a los espectros mas como término

Wow did you just rug-sweep the fact that Sam cheated on Harry? Seriously, fuck you.

Truly enjoyed reading your story but I can't help but wonder why you didn't write anything about the wraith or ori but other than that I'm glad you have to finish writing something gave us some closure to your story which I thank you from the bottom of my eating little heart so for now thank you for writing

You know, it is not heartless corporations, but heartless control-freak governments. Don’t blame corporations for what governments do.
I know where the unreasonable people are in a meeting, and they were almost to a person civilian government employees.

I have no idea how Herm could love Ron, other than mental illness or compulsion, but people do stupid all the time