Shame this is dead is good fic

And another one gone, and another one gone, another one bites the dust...

Another author who made a good story then suddenly disappeared without any prior notice? Ah shit here we go again

This is the best Naruto x Touhou story ever. The way you narrate everything is extraordinary. Mixing two totally different worlds sounds interesting and fun. I hope you still decide to update someday.

Is this still being worked on? If not, can you upload a chapter saying that day discontinued or something ;u;

I am impressed with the story, my favorite part being the interactions between the various factions.
I would like to see what happened to Obito, with him gone is Pein the leader of Akutsksi?
Please post a story about what happened when Obito entered Gensocko!
Perhaps after Itachi makes an appearance.

Reading this is like reading an essay into Naruto politics and history, very well researched.

An excellent start, I like an openning that leaves me hungry for more.

I was mostly looking at the Touhou/Naruto cross-over section as a joke, didn't expect to find anything worthwhile in here. Then, I saw this story, and the summary caught my interest. And I can safely say, right now, that this is one of the best and most original Naruto cross-over stories I have ever read, and the fact that it's with Touhou of all things is just an added, but very lovely, bonus.

For one, it actually takes place in Naruto's world! And he's not this godly badass Gary-Stue that can fix everything by simply existing, making you immediately a more creative writer than many other authors on this site, and the setting, the fact that this not only takes place in the Naruto-verse and that it takes place before the main story line is an incredibly intriguing concept.

The way you choose to involve politics and village-relations instead of making a simple action story, and the way you include some less used characters like Hina and Keine is a very nice touch, and Fugaku's inner thoughts on the relationship between the village and his clan is a rather interesting concept (also the fact that you make him an actual character and not just this generic evil douche bag makes me just want to hug you to death).

Other than the fact that, well, we've yet to really get to know why exactly the Hakurei Barrier has disappeared and why they're in the Elemental Nations instead of our Outside World, though I'd guess we'll get to know it later down the road, and even then, this story and your writing alone is good enough to make me actually overlook the fact in case we don't get to know, simply because I like this story so much.

Otherwise, it would be rather interesting to see other characters interact with the Konoha residents. Like The SDM crew, Marisa, Nineball, etc.

Keep up the AMAZING work, looking forward for MUCH, much more! (o'w'o)

Huh. Bonding. Neat to see them getting along, given Keine's humanity focused attitude.

(Yes Mokou, Keine is growing :3)

No, you're not being too paranoid.

Fugaku, you really have no idea. I mean, they are logical inferences, but still.

On the other hand, potentially butterflying away the Uchiha Massacre because he feels they have other options? Delicious.

great chap! narutos screentime is so little though..

I find irony with the tale of the bamboo cutter and naruto...naruto frankly seems like a sequel to the actual tale.

excellent chapter. i really like hinas the uchiha clan doesnt get massacred.

Great chapter. I'm glad to see that this hasn't been discontinued yet. This is one of the few Naruto Crossovers that I can actually enjoy, simply by virtue of the fact that OOC!Naruto doesn't exist (yet). And even if Naruto eventually gets a personality that is non-canon because of the Touhou Characters, I think you can make it believable.

As for the chapter itself, there isn't much to say honestly. It's well written, but nothing completely groundbreaking yet. I wonder how the relations between Gensokyo and Konoha are going to be like now that the Uchiha seem to be among the central pillars that bind them. I wonder what would happen with the Uchiha themselves. But wondering is usually pointless with stories like this. It could go anywhere and I could still be far from the truth.

Keep up the good work, and hope to see more updates to come.

Please update