That chapter was painfully hard to read. I dont know why the grammar quality all of a sudden turned to crap.

good chapter

Sooo... my only complaint, really, is how easily you throw around the term “master” when in reference to seals, aka “seal master”. I get it, you want a simple term for someone who uses seals, but seal-specialist, or hell, even seal-practitioner would have been better than this blatant “master” left and right. I’m not saying no one shown so far has deserved to be called a seal master, I’m just saying I doubt every, or even most, of the seal users shown have earned the right to be called master.

"Kurama didn't like the tree but it soothed him, not because of Hashirama's chakra but because he inherited his ancestor's body thus to bijuu, Hashirama's tree had some sort lingering scent of their creator. Like how a child would feel safe and comforted by something with their mother's scent."

... OW! ;-; TT

"Kurama was throwing tantrums on his cage, and demanded him to stop visiting the damn tree."

xD I can see that. :p

The scene with Shisui was hilarious and cute. xD :3

... Overall an interesting chapter. :)

This is truly one of my favorite stories. I have a bad memory but I remember this and i keep coming back a rereading it over and over again. I have a question is narutos chain mutated by being part uchiha and like the sharingan will it have the second form?

Danzou be soundin like a street gang leader LMFAO

Awesome fanfiction! Well written. Like your take on Obito's character!

The grammar is an eyesore and utterly atrocious. I’ve never seen such horrible grammatical errors before. I gave up reading after the fourth chapter as the grammatical errors kept increasing to the point where instead of enjoying the story, I was looking out for the next grammatical error instead. The grammar is cancerous. Although I do see potential in the actual storyline.

Las lecciones de fuuinjutsuu van bien.
Estoy seguro que pronto habrá más usuarios de esta rama.
Esta bien que naruto sea chico de edad, pero confundirlo con ser mujer? Jeje pobre naruto.

Al final obito solo estubo jugando con ellos.
Nadie cree que sea madara.
Creo que ni itachi y shisui se dieron cuenta que despertaron su mangekyo sharingan.

Al final su objetivo si era un traidor, pero obito se hizo cargo de el.
Pienso que no era necesario que obito se presente ahora.
Más que nada por que kurama y naruto lo reconocen.
La pelea va a ser inevitable.
Kurama tiene un cuerpo de zoro? Va a ser interesante verlo libre.

Parece que satori resultó una habilidad problemática.
Si no se la maneja correctamente, para el usuario es una tortura.
Pero si en un futuro la puede dominar, sera beneficioso.
como sera la prometida de naruto?
Parece que obito hara su movimiento.
Veremos que sale de eso.

La cena término bien.
Fue muy lindo ver q mikoto actuar así.
Naruto nunca tubo una figura materna, es una experiencia nueva para el.
Naruto sera el maestro de fuuinjutsuu para sasuke?

La misión resultó salir bien, y al parecer Kakashi desconoce la identidad de naruto.
No se si es algo bueno o malo.
Naruto estará enseñando fuuinjutsuu en la academia? Jeje que ironia.
La tan esperada cena se acerca.

Parece que la cena con la familia de itachi tendra que esperar.
Naruto sera ambu temporalmente. Eso sera interesante de ver.
Como les ira en la misión?
Kakashi lo reconocerá?