I really enjoyed this story and the prior one in the series! This was the first teen titans fanfic Ive read and i really enjoyed the characterization of Raven and Jynx and how you developed their relationship. Id have been interested in reading a lot more!

Cmon, marriage scene was half-assed, surely you could at least describe the emotion and awe both parties were feeling upon witnessing the other's glory.

That news report was so biased man, if I didn't know better id say raven rigged it, or ur lazily using this as a plot point.

btw's this is still one of my all time favorits that I keep comming back to.

This...this is not okay.

RWBY and CFVY, huh

love this and the previous one. nice happy ending :)

I've lost count of how many times I've reread this

That boss fight... Didn't really live up to it's hype.
Otherwise, team GemstoneRWBY reference, fite me.
Also, FluffyHP reference, double fite me.

Hmm. From what I know, the revenge fic genre refers to stories where the main character is betrayed by their allies, and becomes a Sasuke on everyone. While this story was good for the most part, this status quo no changing in the slightest ever since chapter 1 is starting to get old.

I have to admit, I'm not a fan of this twist. You can't do that, and then just cop out like that. I was a bit sad when it happened, and now I feel betrayed, like just did it it squeeze my heart, and once the juice run out, you sent it back complaining that it's defective.

Things like character death can be done right, and so do character resurrection, but this is not how it's done.

Summoning the demon army was kinda overkill. And not in the good 'there's no kill like overkill' way, but the bad way, as in just levitating the enemy would be enough to end that fight.

That explanation for Starfire does explain some things about her. But it does raise up a rather important bit: running away from the problem won't solve it.

Hmm. Why the HECK is Starfire still in jump, if she has an entire empire to rule? Leading an entire species is way more important than protecting ONE city. Especially now that she's past her teenage years, so the excuse of 'teenage Rebellion' doesn't work anymore. And neither does the 'she's still a princess' excuse.

Did Melvin ever play FNAF? I think that she might enjoy it.