I thought Hiccup and Jack got together or something! Why would HiccupxJack be in the summary if it wasn't in the story!?

Hey I noticed your next story isn't published. Are you still working on it?

Actually seems pretty in character to me. While he is more sarcastic than stutter-y in the movie, he is more used to them having grown up with them and their tauntings.
Both the books and the movie(plus TV series) have shown he does get nervous easily too. Maybe not as easily as in the book but it's still there. Plus both have also shown him stuttering when nervous too, once again not as much in the movie, but still there.

I love the fact Rapunzel is reacting to Hiccup the same way I did when I first saw the movie,(book him was cute, sure, but) movie him was adorable! When he wasn't having a near death experience(which was happening every 5-10 minutes, like seriously how much trouble can this small boy get into? With how many times he almost died in the movie with just dragons, you'd wonder how much danger he is to himself with magic added?) He was so cute!

If it's the book Toothless, will Hiccup know or learn Dragonese?

I love your story! Great job!
Just a few things though...
How did Hiccup burn Professor Red Death? The two green eyes Hiccup saw, they were the eyes of Toothless right? And since only the wizards who have the purest hearts can see glimpses of the future, does it mean Hiccup is one of them?
Can't wait to see HiJack developing...

Really awsome story cant wait for the second part
Hope it comes soon keep up the awsome work

AND SUDDENLY TOOTHLESS BREAKS THROUGH THE WINDOW JUST LIKE: 'Biatttttcchhheesss!'

Who is the one coupled with Merida? ._.

PERFECT HOUSING. XD

Harry Potter was made around the time TELIVION WAS BEING MADE. which was like 30 YEARS AGO O_O

I really wanted to read this, but I literally can't. I got to chapter two. It seems ok, but I can't look past all the mistakes. 'Scotland skirt' you mean a kilt. I don't know if I missed a joke or anything, Merida's surname is Dunbroch. I'm Scottish myself so maybe I'm just taking a bit of home offense. Plus, if they're getting Hogwarts acceptance letters, they are eleven. They don't seem eleven years old to me.

Good attempt for the small amount I read, but, not for me.

I really like your fic is one of my favorites I hope
you like the idea Continues to include characters from kingdom hearts especially if Soroku (roxasxsora) I hope you update soon I'll be on the lookout

OMG this might just be the best I've read so far and I've read ALOT

Okay so, I'm going to be brutally honest here and say this wasn't the best story I've ever read it wasn't horrible but it wasn't very good either. I'm not flaming you its just that, do you really think you should have written Repunzel out if you've never even seen Tangled? She's so painfully out of character. And what's Ano, and why does she keep saying it? Is it like those sounds or words some anime characters just say? And speaking of anime, 'anime style' is not a good way of explaining something. Ever. And why the HELL did she apologize in Japanese? They're in Britain for Fucks sake and their characters don't originate from anywhere near Japan. And how much younger is Jamie then Jack? I cant imagine him being too young since you're gonna ship him with Merida, which is a little weird actually... However on the up side I do like that you added in other Disney characters, I always love it when people do that. Though I don't think you should add the characters from Kingdom hearts. Disney may be involved with it but that doesn't mean they're Disney characters. Sort of like Disney owns marvel but you wouldn't add iron man or the fantastic four into your story. Or at least I really hope not. And Merida and Jack don't always have to argue, I mean I can bickering from time to time but they're ALWAYS arguing. And I know you want to keep Hiccup in character from both the movie and books but I don't think its really working out for you. At one point sea shy, stuttering and timid and the next he's sarcastic, slightly confident and well you get the point. It's like throwing two characters into one, that or he has two personalities. You're just not making it work. All of the characters are actually out of character now that I think about it. And you need to get a new beta because the one you currently have isn't job well enough. I've seen way too many typos for you to have a beta. Again, not flaming just throwing My opinion out there.