Reviews for Breakable
Schloodie chapter 11 . 5/22
Oh wow this whole thing was beautiful, but that alternative ending killed me...
Grosspointeblankfan chapter 10 . 5/28/2016
I just love how simple your story is. Absolutely brilliant read!
Shubhs chapter 11 . 2/16/2015
That's nice. A fantastic what-could-have-been.
Guest chapter 11 . 7/26/2014
Dear god, give me the bad news first next time :'(
daisydresdendusk chapter 1 . 4/6/2014
I LOVE THIS STORY. It is so beautiful. You are amazing. Both endings were bittersweet and I loved both of them. The alternate ending almost made me cry. This is one of the best doctor who stories ever and a really amazing story in general.
lunalocket32 chapter 11 . 3/1/2014
That was a beautiful story
the-smarsh chapter 11 . 2/11/2014
Oh no. It appears that I am dying from this heartbreaking story. I never saw the alternate ending coming. Excuse me while I go sob and curse the universe several times.
Vickie1996 chapter 11 . 12/11/2013
A really beautiful story, perfect with a happy ending. Then this! This heartbreaking, tear worthy attack of feels! It was great ... really great, but ... it was unexpected because I was so excited to finish the story that I didn't read the chapter title and then she was all old and senile and it was heart breaking ...

Great writing though, well done ... I'm just gonna cry some more

Vickie xxx
Kat Smith chapter 11 . 12/2/2013
I will forevermore hate you for that alternate ending. I am crying my flipping eyes dry. You COULD have left it with a sweet adorable ending, but NOOOOO, you just HAD to ruin it with another ending.

YOU SUCK.

(I mean, not really. You're an incredible author; that's why you suck. Because FEELS.)
BooksAreMyVideogames chapter 11 . 9/3/2013
I love it! I love this story and your writing sooo much! You are such a talented writer. :) Although, I did prefer the chapter before this. ;)
Guest chapter 11 . 8/3/2013
Oh my goodness. Both endings made me cry so hard.
Jeanie chapter 11 . 7/16/2013
I have no idea if you'll read this, but I find your story absolutely brilliant. I love the ending, and I adored the alternate ending. Somehow, though, they both seem to not co-exist, but to work together and I just love how you were able to write them.
Laveycee chapter 11 . 6/23/2013
Both versions are beautiful. Just... gorgeous.
MillionsOfFeels chapter 1 . 6/21/2013
Pretty good story, if you don't count the fact I had to cry myself to sleep after I finished reading it
an-extraordinary-muse chapter 11 . 5/7/2013
I truly have no idea what to say, except that I should not have read the alternate ending under any circumstances. I cried - literally cried. I don't know which ending I like more. This story is beautifully written; it may be one of my favorite pieces, in any fandom, ever. I like it so much I'll even forgive you for making me cry.
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