Reviews for Accidental Bloodline |
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Guest chapter 6 . 7/9 Nice job Suigetsu |
Gilgamesh1997 chapter 1 . 5/30 SHAKUTON! |
ryker55mc chapter 1 . 4/8 PS WIND FIREScorch Release |
ryker55mc chapter 1 . 4/8 Also from the fandom ASH release is WATER, FIRE AND EARTH |
ryker55mc chapter 2 . 4/8 PLS EDIT IT SOO MANY WRONG SPELLINGS AND WRONG TERMS USED... |
thegrison chapter 1 . 3/6 Just a big fat NO. Just No. This story is all messed up from about 4 mins in of reading. Try again but do your research first. |
Guest chapter 3 . 7/16/2019 But how can bloodline ninjutsu can be copied ? |
lou2003us chapter 18 . 12/8/2018 I really want to see what happens next. Looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the great work! |
Monster King chapter 18 . 12/8/2018 Please continue it soon |
Dao of Innocence chapter 1 . 9/25/2018 Don’t use the other programs. Use Grammarly, it’s much better than whatever the fuck you’re using |
sgriffin730 chapter 6 . 7/23/2018 you still need grammer work. you use has for as thought for threw or throw there are other things as well but the story is good |
Busy1002 chapter 1 . 6/17/2018 wind and fire is scorch release |
Some dude chapter 1 . 5/29/2018 The weak you’ve used is the opposite of strong The week you need is a measurement of time The hair you’ve use is on your body The heir you need is a successor Although you can’t be an heir to a clan that you’ve just started That makes you a progenitor |
theta117 chapter 2 . 4/19/2018 Don't always rely on a grammar machine. They may help spell some words, but most of the time they add words that don't make sense in a sentence. Example "It was white as snow" Programs usually change a word "It was was has snow" Like this You should either get a beta or go back and check for mistakes. |
theta117 chapter 1 . 4/19/2018 Those grammer programs are shit |