Reviews for Accidental Bloodline
Guest chapter 6 . 7/9
Nice job Suigetsu
Gilgamesh1997 chapter 1 . 5/30
SHAKUTON!
ryker55mc chapter 1 . 4/8
PS WIND FIREScorch Release
ryker55mc chapter 1 . 4/8
Also from the fandom ASH release is WATER, FIRE AND EARTH
ryker55mc chapter 2 . 4/8
PLS EDIT IT SOO MANY WRONG SPELLINGS AND WRONG TERMS USED...
thegrison chapter 1 . 3/6
Just a big fat NO. Just No. This story is all messed up from about 4 mins in of reading. Try again but do your research first.
Guest chapter 3 . 7/16/2019
But how can bloodline ninjutsu can be copied ?
lou2003us chapter 18 . 12/8/2018
I really want to see what happens next. Looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the great work!
Monster King chapter 18 . 12/8/2018
Please continue it soon
Dao of Innocence chapter 1 . 9/25/2018
Don’t use the other programs. Use Grammarly, it’s much better than whatever the fuck you’re using
sgriffin730 chapter 6 . 7/23/2018
you still need grammer work. you use has for as thought for threw or throw there are other things as well but the story is good
Busy1002 chapter 1 . 6/17/2018
wind and fire is scorch release
Some dude chapter 1 . 5/29/2018
The weak you’ve used is the opposite of strong
The week you need is a measurement of time
The hair you’ve use is on your body
The heir you need is a successor
Although you can’t be an heir to a clan that you’ve just started
That makes you a progenitor
theta117 chapter 2 . 4/19/2018
Don't always rely on a grammar machine. They may help spell some words, but most of the time they add words that don't make sense in a sentence.
Example
"It was white as snow"
Programs usually change a word
"It was was has snow"
Like this

You should either get a beta or go back and check for mistakes.
theta117 chapter 1 . 4/19/2018
Those grammer programs are shit
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