I still remember reading this and I’m rereading it cause damn this is good wether or not you continue this is up to you but I’m still hyped for the next

I’m ready

Can’t wit for chapter 18

I’m so excited for chapter 18

I'll stop reading here for now, I'll pending my chap 16 review untill I pick up this story again.

l like the first half of the story specially Luffy and erza interaction, I don't if this mountain arc is cannon or not but I'm hoping that after Luffy beat kakigoro or that dragon to pulp he will use Haoshoku to it and make it his pet to fly away from the mountain back to magnolia, but it did turns out to a bigger fight.

maybe I just miss Cana, man I miss her but the progress staggering cause of a freaking dragons which is sad.

I hope in 2 more chapter Luffy and erza already at magnolia.
moving on.

MEN ! Moving on!

can't wait to see Luffy back, moving on.

ah finally get wrecked stone boy ... haha, satisfying chap.
Moving one.

enjoyed and great chapter, nothing more to say about this chap.
tho I can't really imagine a midget Luffy using 3rd gear that's hilarious haha.

that's a quite long scene fight for a mere test, eh ? it's just a personal hunch of mine others may disagree with me but it's just I don't really see much weight behind the battle for getting so long like this, maybe it's just who doesn't know anything about FT, I don't even know Perris (the shadow villain) is Canon or not.

other than that I'm enjoying the story and the twist, moving on.

the only thing that I don't like is how the fight between lax and bandage man unfolds, it's quite a bit dragging for my liking, other than that none.

I actually like ultear character so that's a good choice there, and I miss Cana even though I never see her (only her picture) on anime or FT manga you really did a good job portrayed her character in the stories.

moving on.

I want to see that laxus and Luffy fight though I already know who will win, I'm looking forward to it, onto the next chap.

I'm intrigued to see hwo magic works on fairy tail, I might check out some on uTube, anyway good chap, onto the next on.

ooooh cmon again ? jango Hypno now this ? lmao, he is kinda weak with something like that m, huh ?
I'm not sure about you mean by weak-minded (maybe idiot) but don't forget luffy's willpower is second to none.