Reviews for My Story
Guest chapter 33 . 7/25
I LOVE this story! You are such an amazing writer wow! And the way Ino and Hinata clapped back, they were so badass, yesss! There was a chapter were I remember Tenten asking Hidan if he wanted to hangout because of Tenji and his daughter of course. Will a possible friendship blossom between the two? And will Tenten act as a mother fihure in Hidan's daughter's life? Please update soon!
Guest chapter 33 . 7/25
I LOVE this story! You're an amazing writer and it looks like Hinata and Ino finally clapped back! Yay! There was a chapter where Tenten asked Hidan if they could hang out because of Tenji and his daughter of course, will a possible friendship blossom between the two? And will Tenten act as a mother figure in Hidan's daughter's life? Please update soon!
zxrifz24 chapter 33 . 7/27
NARUHINAA all the way. I love Hinata and Sasori’s relationship , he is such a great FRIEND to her . Naruto has guts to part ways with Sasuke business wise just to prove himself to Hinata. I hope is not just being used and a relationship between the two can blossom. Either way, great story from an amazing author , can’t wait for the best chapterssss...
zxrifz24 chapter 33 . 7/27
Hinata is THAT BITCHHH. Omggg I can’t wait for you to continue the story.
mari00t chapter 1 . 7/22
update this story plz...this is awesome
Now in last chapter hinata is being bitch...hell yeah
badass hinata
ZKK chapter 33 . 6/30
I love this book! I started reading when actually was a few chapters in and have been obsessed ever since! I always check in once in a while to see if there's an update, sadly, not always. But that doesn't take away from the fact that this is a brilliant book. There is growth in almost all the characters, it's realistic, and it is written in a manner that is incredibly descriptive!
OkaTurd chapter 33 . 6/23
Lol, I found this book yesterday i’m almost done with all the current chapters (sad), this is very well written and i hope too see more of your books, You’re very talented and i wish you the best.
Shiranai Atsune chapter 33 . 6/19
I'll be honest and say I don't want a NejiKin ending.

I kinda want Hinata to ruin them all, mwahahahaha! :D

But seriously, who will Hinata go after next?

It's been months since you've last updated. But take all the time you need! I'm sure it'll be worth it!
Shiranai Atsune chapter 33 . 6/19
Tenten's really in love with Lee?! ...I did not know until now.

Will we read more of Neji and Tenten (and Kin)? Just to clarify, what does Neji feel for Kin and vice versa? Is Neji just tolerating Kin for his babies? Their story is just sending me in a whirlwind right now.

I am very much looking forward for the next update!
Shiranai Atsune chapter 29 . 6/19
Looking forward to reading more of Tenten's side of this story.

Hmmm, doesn't seem like she really loves Neji, she would've left if she could take her son with her. Kinda hoping she could finally divorce Neji (and outright tell him that she never really loved him) and be with who she really wanted to be with.

This story never fails to send me on a rollercoaster of emotions. I still hate Kin so much though.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/18
is this a good story...i don't know depends on your criteria. this has brought out so much emotion though, so I had to review. just why does this seem ultra-realistic & super focused on the angst. makes me question if love is even worth it with how cynical I've become. ok more about the story...i did not see all the character development & depth other reviews mentioned. yes, this is not your typical sasuhina fix, but the story line in itself is predictable.
elizastone1002 chapter 1 . 6/17
please update
Dynamic chapter 33 . 6/6
I like that you’re not into the shipping wars. It really brings the story into a new light. Anything can happen at this point, and that fact makes this so thrilling and nerve wrecking! I can’t wait to see what happens in the future! Take as long as you’d like. YOU and your health comes first. I hope you’re doing well for yourself and I hope to see an update as soon as you’re ready love!
Acronyms chapter 33 . 6/6
The only good part about this story was Ino and Konan but even they couldn't help salvage this.
Guest chapter 33 . 6/5
I would like to see how sasuke and hinata get back together. and I feel naruto has to also pay cause he was doing all those things with sasuke and he Is a grown man who can't blame others for his doing so he too must get what's coming to him
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