Reviews for Dragon King of Fairy Tail
Killer-Sama20 chapter 40 . 5/12
It's a realy good story and i can't wait to read the next chapter.
theo1004 chapter 1 . 3/7
Pls update I re-reading which makes me love it all over again minus the pairing I love the story so much I would even go as far as to say its one of the best for me
RelentlessIce chapter 40 . 1/25
i really want to see this get updated it is a very interesting read. nice work.
Arianna chapter 40 . 1/18
Hey I noticed this story hasn't updated since 2015 and it's 2020 now so I'm guessing this story is dead. If you so happen to see this know that there is at least one person that would love for you to continue this story. I loved it. I don't think I'll ever read another fanfic quite like this. It was amazing and beautifully written. 10/10. Might even read it again. Hopefully, you will continue this masterpiece but if not just know this was brilliant.
creativesm75 chapter 40 . 8/13/2019
very good
iron-slayer-dragon chapter 40 . 5/19/2019
Good story.i remember starting this when you first started then I lost it when I switched phones because I forgot to follow the story. You've done amazing work on this story.
Guest chapter 40 . 5/6/2019
Give us more!
Warmachine375 chapter 25 . 4/27/2019
Please make the Rune Knights to be as strong as they're supposed to be and give them justice for the huge disservice that Hiro Mashima had portrayed them as weak, incompetent, and virtually useless as cannon fodder and cartoony guards.

I have this idea of mine for the ranking system of the Rune Knights for the Adaptational Badass dose big time on them from the bottom to the top of the chain of command if you're interested of course for this story:
1. Cadet
2. Regular
3. Lieutenant
4. Captain
5. Major
6. Field Commander
7. Colonel
8. Division Commander
9. Major General
10. Lieutenant General
11. General
12. Minister General
13. Grand General
14. Supreme Commander

What do you think in your thoughts and opinions about the Rune Knight ranking than just being Captain like Lahar being Captain of the 4th Custody Enforcement Unit for example?

To describe about these Rune Knight rankings:
1. The Supreme Commander is the highest rank within the entirety of Ishgar's Rune Knights, who commands all the Rune Knights in the continent and possesses the strength on par with that of Fiore's highest ranked Wizard Saint and Ishgar's strongest Mage but is subservient to the Chairman of the Magic Council.

2. The Grand General is the leader of a country's Rune Knights and is on a level of a 5th Wizard Saint. Supported by four Generals who are direct subordinates to him/her when it comes to leading their forces in battle. Is also considered to be second-in-command of the Supreme Commander who takes charge by himself/herself after arriving from Pergrande Kingdom, the largest and most powerful country of Ishgar.

3. The Generals are the top ranking officers of the Rune Knights and the chosen 4 who answer to the Grand General and the Supreme Commander too as well and are as strong as a Wizard Saint. Sometimes they take in apprentices who are Lieutenant Generals whose respective level of power are that of Guild Aces in grooming and training them as their potential successors in the future.

4. The Major Generals are the direct subordinates of the Lieutenant Generals and are somewhat considered the middle-men of the Rune Knight chain of command and they are considered to be on an S-Class level.

5. The Minister General is the one who usually takes care of the internal and external affairs of the Rune Knights, usually involves politics and public relations that does not require a lot of power in such rank while the Generals lead the fighting, yet is stronger than the current four Generals. Usually reserved for veteran Rune Knights or former Councilors with military background.

6. As for the rest of the other ranks: Division Commander, Colonel and Field Commander, they control the divisions and battalions as they personally lead them in the front lines and are on the mid-tier class of power compared with seasoned Guild Mages.

7. And the Major, Captain, and Lieutenant, they command the squadrons and teams of Regulars and Cadets who are the weakest of the Rune Knights all like scrubs they are and needed more training, and three high ranks in the lower chain of command of them have a moderately strong level in their own right compared to experienced Guild Mages.

On the bright side, some of the high-ranking Rune Knights can be allowed to customize their officer's uniforms with their own fashion preferences along with their own custom weaponry and equipment that stands them out from the lower ranks in the chain of command (whose canon Rune Knight rank and file uniform with staves looks so boring and uninspiring, and needs to be replaced with replacement of something more practical yet formal and militaristic uniform and equipped with actual standard weaponry but the staves can stay though) and be recognized and distinguished so long they follow strict uniform code and protocol including the addition of the Council colors and ankh emblem in their uniform; be it blue and white; and black and white.

The canon Rune Knight officer's uniform worn by Lahar and Doranbolt, and the other Rune Knight officer's uniform worn by Gajeel, Levy, and Pantherlily during their time at the Wizard Saint-run Council for one year are still cool and can stay as standard uniforms for the Rune Knight officers in the Council military with some little modifications and additions into them if they wanted to.

Remember the MPF event of the Grand Magic Games arc and Lahar, who was a guest commentator, stated that Millianna's MPF level is high enough to get a position of Captain in the Rune Knights after she struck the Magic Power Finder device as first contender.

So I got this in accordance to their MPF rankings if these people were in the Rune Knights:
1. Millianna: 365 - Captain
2. Nobarly: 124 - Lieutenant
3. Hibiki: 95 - Regular
4. Obra: 4 - Barely even qualified as a Cadet
5. Orga: 3,825 - Field Commander
6. Jura: 8,544 - Lieutenant General
7. Cana: 9,999 - General (even though she did it through Mavis lending her Fairy Glitter just to get a cheap ass win the event)

In this story's MPF event
1. Kagura: 475 - Captain
2. Sting: 4120 - Colonel
3. Lyon: 4250 - Colonel
4. Gray: 9450 - General

In this chart, these are the MPF Levels for the Rune Knight rankings:
10 - 50: Cadet
51 - 100: Regular
101 - 350: Lieutenant
351 - 1,000: Captain
1,001 - 3,000: Major
3,001 - 4,000: Field Commander
4,001 - 5,000: Colonel
5,001 - 6,000: Division Commander
6,001 - 7,000: Major General
7,001 - 9,000: Lieutenant General
9,001 - 12,000: General
18,000: Minister General
24,000: Grand General
30,000: Supreme Commander

What do you think of the MPF levels in your thoughts and opinion?

I have a feeling Fairy Tail and the Dragon Reincarnates won't see that coming since 7 years did pass and the Council had improved their military power and forces after the humiliating defeat by Azuma's hand singlehandedly. Heck the Rune Knight could even have the captured Grimoire Heart Airship as their new mobile headquarters and flying fortress refurbished and customized under the Council's colors. Perhaps Queen Zitana had a hand in it so that Fiore will be better protected.

Heck you could even give a expanded lore for the Rune Knights and their history and purpose as guardians of the World of Magic and military police organization of the Magic Council in their founding with their duties of patrolling and protecting the continent from threats, enforce the Council's laws and ideals, and dispense justice on criminals and lawbreakers they battled and apprehended. That'd be so awesome!

After all, I always wanted to see Lahar in real action with actual Magic and combat skills he displays instead of just standing there and commanding the troops in the canon. Heck, even Doranbolt can kick serious butt as a Rune Knight in canon.

Having Fiore have a country-wide military force of Rune Knights with enormous magical ability that can keep evildoers in check alongside the Magic Council's vast weaponry would certainly explain why they (Tartaros) hesitated from open conflict for so long (The seven year time-skip). To operate from the shadows and find the perfect opportunity in order to eliminate the Magic Council alongside the military Hierarchy, Fiore's military and magical forces would be paralyzed as their government has been effectively neutralized. The civilian government (the king and such) won't be able to do much at all in the chaos and confusion because of the lack of leadership for all the separate branches of government which is what Tartaros desired. A perfect opportunity in order to activate Face. Fairy Tail is just one of the many guilds in the country and thus not the main line of defense from country-wide threats such Tartaros. The magical bomb that Seilah had Elfman plant was just a bonus in the plan to eliminate Fiore's strongest guild in the aftermath of the Grand Magic Games.

To add onto that, it would also aid in the 'power of government' that one got a distinct feeling from the beginning of Mashima's story. They're not cannon fodder but an actual power to be feared. The Rune Knights: Fiore's civilian and magical military alongside the Magic Council. Light and Dark Guilds have a reason to be afraid of their attention and respect their authority because of the power they wield.
Guest chapter 40 . 4/22/2019
please update the story
ShadowSnake22 chapter 40 . 4/12/2019
I loved this story it was a great Fairy Tail Fanfic. I cant wait for the update. Excellent work.
aSleepyPenguin chapter 1 . 3/25/2019
A King of All Dragons is getting his ass kicked by an 18 or something-year-old girl :
godess bubbles chapter 40 . 3/6/2019
What a cliff hanger this was! I'm happy to see a new chapter! It's been so long I had to re-read the entire thing to remember what was happening. I hope to see another chapter soon!
Naniti chapter 40 . 3/4/2019
Interesting, I hope to see if Ragnarok finally activates or if they are able to send them back to their time, hopefully won’t take as long though
Warmachine375 chapter 40 . 2/27/2019
Welcome back at long last and it is a great chapter as always. Looks like Zitana is confronting the past version of her deceased Dragon brother Zirconis and making a plan to send the Dragons back to their time. Perhaps by destroying the Eclipse Gate for it worked like in canon but it is easier said than done. It would be interesting to see Zitana turning into her original Dragon Form that would surprise everyone that the Queen of Fiore was a Dragon reincarnate.

Meanwhile the Four Gods of Ishgar are battling the past Dragon version of Wendy and Sora had to stop them from trying to kill his mother that would cause a time paradox and might affect the present day Wendy. Of course God Serena would have none of it and sees this as an opportunity to use his 8 Dragon Slayer Magics upon actual Dragons to slay. While Draculos, Wolfheim and even Warrod (with great reluctance to fight members of his old friend Mavis' guild) had to do their duty to protect Fiore from threats and even they are doing quite damage on Marvel when working together.

It looks like Marvel is starting to realize the truth that Wendy is her future self in human form and Sora is her son, after protecting the boy from God Serena's attack for getting in his way.

Looks like the Dragon reincarnates have transformed into their Dragon Forms and are going all out not only to keep the Four Gods of Ishgar from harming their past selves lethally but to stick with Zitana's plan to succeed which of course only excites God Serena even more to go all out in full power and show them the might of Hybrid Theory.

I'm surprised no one questioned why God Serena possessed multiple elements of Dragon Slayer Magic when they see him in action on Marvel, Sora, and Wendy. Perhaps when Hyberion, Wolfheim, Warrod or even God Serena will explain in the next chapter upon fighting the Dragons, past and present selves.

God Serena's 8 elements in this story are:
1. Cavern Dragon Slayer Magic - canon
2. Purgatory Dragon Slayer Magic - canon
3. Sea King Dragon Slayer Magic - canon
4. Gale Dragon Slayer Magic - canon
5. Storm Dragon Slayer Magic - story exclusive
6. Molten Dragon Slayer Magic - story exclusive
7. Armor Dragon Slayer Magic - idea
8. Blizzard Dragon Slayer Magic - idea

As for Hyberion's Vampire Magic, the idea would be that his vampiric like abilities would be like that of Castlevania's Dracula or Hellsing Ultimate's Alucard or even Warhammer Fantasy's Vlad von Carstein or Abhorash. Vampire Magic needed more fleshing out to be more than just one scene of Hyberion choking God Serena before he unleashed his Dragon Slayer Magic for the first time in the canon.

And for Wolfheim's abilities would be advanced tier Beast Soul that puts Elfman's own to shame or even Mirajane too as well and his ultimate transformation would be Megido of Lava, a massive humanoid lion that controls extremely powerful flames and lava at command, and possessed inhumanly immense strength to give even Dragons a run for their money from Rave Master as a reference.

Hope you like the ideas for three of Four Gods of Ishgar. :)

Have you seen FT 100 Years Quest sequel manga? What do you think of the Five God Dragons, Diabolos and its roster of Fifth Generation Dragon Slayers or Dragon Eaters and White Wizard/Touka?

Anyways this is a really interesting chapter and I'm looking forward for the next update.
TheLaughingStalk chapter 40 . 2/26/2019
It's getting super intense! Ill be looking forward to whatever comes next. Wonderful job and good luck
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