why not bring this vampire to Aro so he can read him and know where is Bella? I don't even understand why aro didn't read this David in the 1st place

how come Bella doesn't faint with the blood on Japer?
How is it possible for Aro to read her when he couldn't before because she is a shield?

I don't understand why Jasper refers to Edward as a "tortured, pathetic wop." Aside from the ethnic slur being offensive, even for vampires I'd imagine, Jasper is there with the Italian coven. Edward is not Italian, is he?

I don't know if you still see reviews on this story, but it was so much fun. Angst is highly overrated. Thank you for sharing it!

I love this story

This story was so good! It made me cry and laugh and I absolutely loved it. Thank you so much for writing this amazing story! You are such a great writer!

That was soo fucking hot. Not going to lie that was just spectacular. Wow... there are no words just... wow

I agree with your view and although I don’t know who you are, I am very proud for you standing up for what you believe in as it takes a lot of courage and your reply was spot on amazing.

Woah that was a really intense and well written chapter!

Oh no Jasper needs to be much larger than an average man. He's a goddamned vampire. All the vampire enhancements and all lol

I thought that Bella had a shield... so how could Aro see into her mind?

Love it!

This story has been so great! I have really enjoyed reading it! Thank you for sharing!

I absolutely loved your story! It was amazing. I liked how you had multiple "big, bad villians," and various plot bunnies to chase after when reading. I also loved how you incorporated the sexy foursome, and the lovely mental pictures it painted with those hot as fuck lemons. Char and Bella's little romance was so cute and hot too. Don't listen to the bigots out there, on same sex partners, they are just jealous, because they were most likely raised to be close-minded individuals, with only their "dirty" imaginations, to provide an outlet to their, most likely, forced-on-them, prude and boring vanilla, lifestyles. They are all probaly repeating the same close-minded and bigoted attitude their parents forced on them, to their own children. They probaly all have had at least thoughts of having same sex love. They've probaly been told, that it was wrong and "evil," by their extreme, bible thumping family and church. Don't let it get you down. I'm assuming from your penname that you were born in 1981? I was too. My penname is jaspersmate81. I haven't written on this site yet. I'm trying to figure out how to do so. I only have a phone and a tablet. I did start a writing a Twilight/Supernatural crossover on Wattpad under my other penname bellawhitlock81, its called Crimson Apocalypse. I've only currently gotten 241 followers/favorites. I am in awe of your writing skills. I truly loved your story! How did you get so many people to view your story? Not that I'm complaining, just honest curiosity? I've been reading stories on here since around 2009 or so. This is the first time I've come across your story. I really like it. I wish you'd consider a sequel. Like against the Romanians or that crazy bastard, Joham, who "fathered" Nahuel, and who made all those hybrids. Even a oneshot sequel or something would ve so cool. Don't listen to your husband! Your writing is absolutely amazing! I love to write too and I always had a big dream of creating my own imaginary world into a novel, or several, like Twilight, TVD, The Originals, and Legacies have. Keep up with the excellent work! I cannot wait to read more of your works. Thank you for writing it! Out of mere curiosity, what kind of writing software do you need use, to write a story to post on here?

This was a very good story . I overlooked the misspelling it happens it didn't effect the story over all. Great job keep it up.